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Array ( [sid] => 120378 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Failing of Words [time] => 2006-05-19 09:40:24 [hometext] => This does not convey the deepness of my emotion but nothing can, this is all I can do and I hope it is enough to save me. [bodytext] => My writing is failing.
It is not expressing me.
I am losing it.
How shall I find myself.
Where shall I find myself.
It is not here.

I am falling into darkness.
It is a never ending pit.
A void in my world.
The void is my world.

Black is all I see.
White is no longer.
The black seems blacker then black.
It is nothingness. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Heretic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Failing of Words

Contributed by Heretic on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 09:40:24 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

My writing is failing.
It is not expressing me.
I am losing it.
How shall I find myself.
Where shall I find myself.
It is not here.

I am falling into darkness.
It is a never ending pit.
A void in my world.
The void is my world.

Black is all I see.
White is no longer.
The black seems blacker then black.
It is nothingness.

Copyright © Heretic ... [ 2006-05-19 09:40:24]
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Re: Failing of Words (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 10:51:01 AM AEST
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i think you did well in this...ironic, though, that your emotions are conveyed quite well despite the authors note.

well done.

wiz

Re: Failing of Words (User Rating: 1 )
by falcon on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 11:25:21 AM AEST
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Too well some of us know this void! Well done, Heretic, and i hope expressing it helps you see white again someday.

Re: Failing of Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:08:08 PM AEST
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I have yet to hear of someone that has had this become permanent. Hang in there, the words will come when they are ready....and I see they are not completely gone! :)

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