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Array ( [sid] => 120366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BLAMED [time] => 2006-05-19 01:33:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You told me,
that I was to blame
for your inability to love me.

Even now,
when I have finally managed
not to hurt each time you try to make me cry
you still cannot bare to look me in the eye.

You blame me…
For your sleepless nights,
For your worried mind,
For the increased beating of your heart,
And for every beat that comes too late.
For the simple fact that it’s me
of whom you are afraid.

You do not have the right
to show this burden down my throat.
Since you were never there for me.
I grew up alone.

You never came to me at night
to chase away the monsters
that hid underneath the bed.
You never came to close the closet doors,
though they were portals for the dead.

You never came to kiss me goodnight,
and to wish me pleasant dreams.
You just closed the bedroom door real tight
And refused to hear my screams.

Where were you
when the demons came to take away this your little girl?
You were sound asleep,
feeling safe and warm in your peaceful world.

I always had to stand on my own
To fight off Dark Fate, so black
Where were you,
when your little girl’s innocent soul got beaten on so heavily
that it finally almost cracked?

To you I’m sure as hell no gift from God.
But a punishment brought onto you.
After all this time you are still not sure to which world that I belong.
But tell me,
Would it really make a difference if you knew…?

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BLAMED

Contributed by Davinah on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:33:53 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You told me,
that I was to blame
for your inability to love me.

Even now,
when I have finally managed
not to hurt each time you try to make me cry
you still cannot bare to look me in the eye.

You blame me…
For your sleepless nights,
For your worried mind,
For the increased beating of your heart,
And for every beat that comes too late.
For the simple fact that it’s me
of whom you are afraid.

You do not have the right
to show this burden down my throat.
Since you were never there for me.
I grew up alone.

You never came to me at night
to chase away the monsters
that hid underneath the bed.
You never came to close the closet doors,
though they were portals for the dead.

You never came to kiss me goodnight,
and to wish me pleasant dreams.
You just closed the bedroom door real tight
And refused to hear my screams.

Where were you
when the demons came to take away this your little girl?
You were sound asleep,
feeling safe and warm in your peaceful world.

I always had to stand on my own
To fight off Dark Fate, so black
Where were you,
when your little girl’s innocent soul got beaten on so heavily
that it finally almost cracked?

To you I’m sure as hell no gift from God.
But a punishment brought onto you.
After all this time you are still not sure to which world that I belong.
But tell me,
Would it really make a difference if you knew…?

Copyright Â© Davinah ... [ 2006-05-19 01:33:53]
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Re: BLAMED (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:04:47 AM AEST
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wow..thats painful..the emotions are strong ..you did a wonderful job expressing this. amazing write. if there is ever a time you wanna talk to somebody..i'm here..send me a message. i'll always listen..and i'll always respond.....and i would never shut the door and refuse to hear your screams...i would love to hear them....stay strong. *hugs*

Re: BLAMED (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:15:45 AM AEST
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wow this is a very eemotional piece. It must have been really painful for you to write this. I commend you for doing so. I can relate to this very much myself. You are no ones burden or punishment. You are a blessing and if you never felt that way know you are. Look at your work here. You are here for a good reason. Beautiful words:)

~Lo

Re: BLAMED (User Rating: 1 )
by Sordida on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:20:21 AM AEST
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I can always tell a good poem if I can feel the emotion of the writer by the end of it. I feel the pain that you went through. I really feel like crying right now. That's an amazing power to have over people. This is fantastic.

Re: BLAMED (User Rating: 1 )
by Kamal on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 09:59:28 AM AEST
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wow but stll understand men are men that are no better than any human so we have weakness and mistakes... please forgive your dad so him your the bigger person you are him its just that your in woman form.. he is inside you whether you believe in or not his seed is inplanted in you thats why you feel the way you do its the same way he felt while raisind you don't you see just take a look back and see.. step out of the anger circle to see what we I see then you should know to love that man plainly because you are alive to express the pain he has sent.

Peace & Love
good write!!!

Re: BLAMED (User Rating: 1 )
by k2kdesigner on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 01:47:15 PM AEST
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beautiful poetry very emotional and I can feel with you on several occasions throuth this. I know it's painful to write about things but it always makes me feel a lot better towards people when I express my feelings on paper..
Keep it up...xoxo

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