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Array ( [sid] => 120327 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Break my heart, I'll still love you [time] => 2006-05-18 14:27:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I've given you my heart,
You can break it if you wish
Just please don't give it back.
Break my heart, I'll still love you.

Break it into a million little pieces
And put them in a pretty, silver bowl.
Let everyone see the shimmering shards
That were my heart.
Let them know that you once loved me.
Let them marvel at the way the light
Dances and sparkles like fire-
Deceptively beautiful.

Then show them the heart that broke mine-
The golden lump on the pedestal,
Protected the way mine never was.

Which is more brilliant?
Which loved more?
Which was loved more?
Do you even know?

Break my heart, I'll still love you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 22 [informant] => brokenbutterfly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Break my heart, I'll still love you

Contributed by brokenbutterfly on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:27:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I've given you my heart,
You can break it if you wish
Just please don't give it back.
Break my heart, I'll still love you.

Break it into a million little pieces
And put them in a pretty, silver bowl.
Let everyone see the shimmering shards
That were my heart.
Let them know that you once loved me.
Let them marvel at the way the light
Dances and sparkles like fire-
Deceptively beautiful.

Then show them the heart that broke mine-
The golden lump on the pedestal,
Protected the way mine never was.

Which is more brilliant?
Which loved more?
Which was loved more?
Do you even know?

Break my heart, I'll still love you.

Copyright © brokenbutterfly ... [ 2006-05-18 14:27:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Break my heart, I'll still love you (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:47:55 PM AEST
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Oh these words are so emotionally charged. I think it signifies we can love someone still, well after they have broken your heart. I found it very touching.Thanks for adding. Sue x

Re: Break my heart, I'll still love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 07:02:43 PM AEST
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Wow. This is such a beautifully written piece of work. The emotion behind it...it's obvious that it all stemmed from true heartbreak. And I loved the ending with such a powerful finishing line. Wonderful work.

Re: Break my heart, I'll still love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:03:20 AM AEST
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Wow sounds like you wrote this fast and out of pure emotion at that moment. I enjoyed it...thanks for sharing it:)

~Lo

Re: Break my heart, I'll still love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentlemanpoet on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 07:50:49 AM AEST
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I think that someone that truely loves someone else could not break their heart like this. But any way good write. thanks for posting. I wish for thee love.

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