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Array ( [sid] => 120300 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What is taken.........But is it?! [time] => 2006-05-17 21:43:38 [hometext] => hey im always smiling [bodytext] => Something is there
Something is felt
Its,soo...Simple

Brought by a new fullfilment
A new being
And new path

This Is a new beginning, and new road for a path to cross

Its bold, yet soft

Its Airy, yet for one who has what it takes.....
I am for one........ A whole new start

Take what is given
Take what is in front
And
Take ,Me [comments] => 8 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 73 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

What is taken.........But is it?!

Contributed by brew on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 09:43:38 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Something is there
Something is felt
Its,soo...Simple

Brought by a new fullfilment
A new being
And new path

This Is a new beginning, and new road for a path to cross

Its bold, yet soft

Its Airy, yet for one who has what it takes.....
I am for one........ A whole new start

Take what is given
Take what is in front
And
Take ,Me

Copyright © brew ... [ 2006-05-17 21:43:38]
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Re: What is taken.........But is it?! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:10:22 PM AEST
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Very captavating write.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: What is taken.........But is it?! (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:51:51 PM AEST
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very emotive brew..

plain and simple..good work-

B

Re: What is taken.........But is it?! (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 12:02:49 AM AEST
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very nicely written

Re: What is taken.........But is it?! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 08:17:51 AM AEST
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This made me smile, I can't pinpoint why, but I don't think I need to.
Thank you.

Re: What is taken.........But is it?! (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchHoward on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 09:24:12 AM AEST
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I love the fact that life can be full of new beginnings, for the ones who have "what it takes" and "take what is given." Good poetry!
Butch

Re: What is taken.........But is it?! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:51:20 PM AEST
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A simple yet most provacotive style u have no
matter what u write it's most effective and deserves reading not 2 mention a coment. nice work dayna. most enjoyable.

Ben

Re: What is taken.........But is it?! (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 02:14:30 AM AEST
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very heartfelt sentiments..
:)

B

Re: What is taken.........But is it?! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 12:15:28 PM AEST
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Never shallow are your thoughts Dayna.
[I love the author's note! : ) ]

Very thought provoking and unique, as always.
Hope all is well.

~Breezy

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