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Unexplained mystics of an ashtray??
Contributed by
bigbadblinkybill
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Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 08:28:01 AM in AEST
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Flickering embers in the tray,
Like distant memories of a better day.
Smoke stings my eyes,
Like tears once before,
But like the raven I say nevermore.
You gave me life when my heart skipped a beat,
but thats one thing I do not want to repeat.
Forgive me if I am distant,
or never seem to care,
I am trying to keep my heart
'cos I heven't got a spare.
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Re: Unexplained mystics of an ashtray??
(User Rating: 1 ) by desireemiote on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:36:10 AM AEST (User
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Inspiration really can come from anywhere:)
Love it
Megan(and her bun in the oven)
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Re: Unexplained mystics of an ashtray??
(User Rating: 1 ) by randumbchit on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 11:08:30 AM AEST (User
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thats great one of my poems was inspired by tripping over a stair loved the write
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Re: Unexplained mystics of an ashtray??
(User Rating: 1 ) by Keilantra on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:47:17 PM AEST (User
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Nice, nice.
Forgive me if I am distant,
or never seem to care,
I am trying to keep my heart
Loved that, i think i might have been better if you left out the "cos in the last line, and just left it. but its still well done.
xXx
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