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Array ( [sid] => 120225 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Tragic Suicide [time] => 2006-05-16 23:13:16 [hometext] => This was to my best friend and then he wrote me one in return. This peom means alot ot me just because i can relate to it and i know how it feels to be like this. [bodytext] => Tears ran down
Make up was smeared,
Blood on the floor
This time they feared.
She ended her life
Threw it away,
Hand on the knife
That ended her day.
Her boyfriend came home
The house was a mess,
Looked on the floor
And noticed the death.
He wrote a note
Then slit his wrist
'Life was a blurr
It was covered by mist.
Until you came to town
you turned it around.
If something happened
Id be by your side.
Til death do us part
So i ended my life' [comments] => 2 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 72 [informant] => phenobarbital [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

A Tragic Suicide

Contributed by phenobarbital on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:13:16 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

Tears ran down
Make up was smeared,
Blood on the floor
This time they feared.
She ended her life
Threw it away,
Hand on the knife
That ended her day.
Her boyfriend came home
The house was a mess,
Looked on the floor
And noticed the death.
He wrote a note
Then slit his wrist
'Life was a blurr
It was covered by mist.
Until you came to town
you turned it around.
If something happened
Id be by your side.
Til death do us part
So i ended my life'

Copyright © phenobarbital ... [ 2006-05-16 23:13:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Tragic Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowFox on Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 10:28:44 PM AEST
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So sad. I would hate it if someone took their life for me.

Re: A Tragic Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 09:33:43 AM AEST
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wow, so...i can't even think of a word for it. powerful, well-written. i loved it!
~lexy~

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