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It is causing mixed feelings
I want to cry
But I can’t let it out
I want to scream
But it comes out as a sob
I want to yell at the world
But it is too big to care
I want to admit everything
But everyone will just make fun of me
I long to cry on a guy’s shoulder
But no one wants to stay long enough to let me
I want to laugh when nothing else works
But something is keeping me from it.
I want to run from all my fears
But I just cower in a corner hope to not be seen
I want to disappear
Wait, I already have
I want to reappear
But no one wants me around
I want to care about someone
But no one wants me to care about them
I want some one to love
But no one wants to be loved by me
I want some one to care about me,
But I am gone from every ones memory
Why does every one hate me?
Why can’t I get rid of the tears in my eyes?
Why won’t some one wipe them away?
Why oh why do I feel so cold inside?
When will this broken heart mend?
When will it be new again?
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Sad Girl's Poem

Contributed by Shorty_Ace on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 10:12:48 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Why can’t I kill this pain?
It is causing mixed feelings
I want to cry
But I can’t let it out
I want to scream
But it comes out as a sob
I want to yell at the world
But it is too big to care
I want to admit everything
But everyone will just make fun of me
I long to cry on a guy’s shoulder
But no one wants to stay long enough to let me
I want to laugh when nothing else works
But something is keeping me from it.
I want to run from all my fears
But I just cower in a corner hope to not be seen
I want to disappear
Wait, I already have
I want to reappear
But no one wants me around
I want to care about someone
But no one wants me to care about them
I want some one to love
But no one wants to be loved by me
I want some one to care about me,
But I am gone from every ones memory
Why does every one hate me?
Why can’t I get rid of the tears in my eyes?
Why won’t some one wipe them away?
Why oh why do I feel so cold inside?
When will this broken heart mend?
When will it be new again?

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Re: Sad Girl's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentlemanpoet on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:02:41 AM AEST
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So very sad. Just remember there will be a new day and with it will come the sun shinning brightly just for you. I wish for thee love.

Re: Sad Girl's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by spyndl on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:05:24 AM AEST
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I have had my opens recently, darkness will only bring mroe darkness. I had the sames feelings you have for almost all my life. You need to pray to God, and not just pray for a sign, but pray to him to come into your life. Once you finaly open your heart to Him, all the darkness will go away. Those dark emotions and feelings of loneliness and self pity are wasted, but are so easy to fall into. When you let God into your life and let him rule you, the light of the world will make you cry tears of joy.

Re: Sad Girl's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by yackerz85 on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 03:07:38 PM AEST
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Like spyndl said you should turn to Jesus. He can be your shoulder to cry on and friend when no one else cares.

Re: Sad Girl's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by His_Infernal_Majesty on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:02:40 PM AEST
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Nice poem, I feel the way you express in this poem, everyday of my life.

Re: Sad Girl's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by depressedsoul on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:32:00 AM AEST
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I like this its very sad and sounds like me sometimes but hey keep it up Shorty Ace you can do it ....lololol

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