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Array ( [sid] => 120075 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Diagnose Me [time] => 2006-05-14 22:22:40 [hometext] => Comments are appreciated:) [bodytext] => Doctor take a look at me,
Today I don’t feel well,
I don’t know what is wrong with me,
My mother she says that I look pale.

I know that something isn’t right,
I can feel it inside my veins,
And the way my hair falls out constantly,
Is driving me insane.

I took a little run today,
And I could feel my bodies cries,
I know I’m probably imaging it,
But doctor could I die?

“The tests we ran they came back today,”
The doctor says to me,
“It looks as though some things are off,”
“I can see you in a week”.

Now what do I do I sit here and wait?
As my body becomes frailer everyday,
I guess all I can do for now,
Is hope to God and pray.
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Diagnose Me

Contributed by Lo2681 on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 10:22:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Doctor take a look at me,
Today I don’t feel well,
I don’t know what is wrong with me,
My mother she says that I look pale.

I know that something isn’t right,
I can feel it inside my veins,
And the way my hair falls out constantly,
Is driving me insane.

I took a little run today,
And I could feel my bodies cries,
I know I’m probably imaging it,
But doctor could I die?

“The tests we ran they came back today,”
The doctor says to me,
“It looks as though some things are off,”
“I can see you in a week”.

Now what do I do I sit here and wait?
As my body becomes frailer everyday,
I guess all I can do for now,
Is hope to God and pray.

Copyright Â© Lo2681 ... [ 2006-05-14 22:22:40]
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Re: Diagnose Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Pink-Cherry on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 10:46:13 PM AEST
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in a sense, this poem reminds me of those found within Shel Silverstein's poetry books.. and i like those poems, so i like this one, too

Re: Diagnose Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 10:56:13 PM AEST
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The waiting must be torture, I'm sure..... worse than the actual pain... Nice write
Jenni

Re: Diagnose Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:18:52 AM AEST
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Those were exactly some signs of my depression.. know what I did.. I took the 20th..

Line.. RL

Re: Diagnose Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 09:12:58 AM AEST
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A sad and touching write hope the best 4 u,
nicely presented.

Ben

Re: Diagnose Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 01:04:32 PM AEST
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This is deep and sad. A very nice poem.

Take care.

Scott

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