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Array ( [sid] => 120071 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => endless ramblings of the insane [time] => 2006-05-14 21:35:46 [hometext] => just needed to write, please comment [bodytext] => have you ever wondered if the sky will fall?
and if it does will it land on you?
will it hurt or will it save?
if you were stuck who would you call?

no ghosts in this town
just empty beings
like the rubbish from christmas holidays
this is the caravan park of the world

killing me loudly, no hiding this pain
do you dream of warmer days?
when rain is too far away to scare?
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endless ramblings of the insane

Contributed by guiltycircles on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 09:35:46 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



have you ever wondered if the sky will fall?
and if it does will it land on you?
will it hurt or will it save?
if you were stuck who would you call?

no ghosts in this town
just empty beings
like the rubbish from christmas holidays
this is the caravan park of the world

killing me loudly, no hiding this pain
do you dream of warmer days?
when rain is too far away to scare?
endless ramblings of the insane




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Re: endless ramblings of the insane (User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Daisy on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 11:25:26 PM AEST
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Thought provoking.


Re: endless ramblings of the insane (User Rating: 1 )
by KarlaMarie on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 06:44:39 AM AEST
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Hello lady...
i thought this was a depressing and an interesting read. and i love that kinda stuff ;)
i really like this line of course
endless ramblings of the insane
it is such a cool line and now i wish i came up with it.

KarlaMarie



Re: endless ramblings of the insane (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 01:18:06 PM AEST
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i love this! you're a very talented poet, i really like the line "no ghosts in this town". very well done :D !




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