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[aid] => mick
[title] => Apple Blossom
[time] => 2006-05-14 20:16:14
[hometext] => I thought of this Haiku as I trimmed a branch of flowers from the Apple Tree beside my home. The flowers, I gave to my mother. The poem, I will leave for you.
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Apple blossom field
Enriched by the golden fruits
Tis such a sweet smell
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Apple Blossom
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Pink-Cherry
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Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:16:14 PM in AEST
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Apple blossom field
Enriched by the golden fruits
Tis such a sweet smell
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Pink-Cherry
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2006-05-14 20:16:14]
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Re: Apple Blossom
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:46:54 PM AEST
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| Well-crafted haiku! Reading that, I felt like I really was sitting in the shade of an apple tree, enjoying nature. This is exquisitely written...well done. |
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Re: Apple Blossom
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by Lo2681 on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 10:44:04 PM AEST
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Very cute:)
~Lo |
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Re: Apple Blossom
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by ButchHoward on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 04:41:43 PM AEST
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Excellent Haiku! This one put me right in the middle of the orchard.
I swear I could smell the sweet aroma wafting on the breeze!
I also like the apple tree graphic - very Japanese. I love Haiku! I believe it is the purest form of poetry. Thanks for posting this!
Butch |
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Re: Apple Blossom
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:42:41 PM AEST
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Wonderful Haiku... and the pic complements it well.....
Welcome to YPDC....I know you would enjoy it here...
Jenni (who loves haikus) |
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Re: Apple Blossom
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:57:13 PM AEST
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Whadaya know! This was some sales presentation fer yer fan club here at YPDC. Having read your first two posts already impressed to a very high level, I end up with, like ButchHoward believes and I do too, the purest form of poetry. I started writing poetry in high school, my first hundred or so writes were haiku. Teacher said I rambled in my writing so haiku was my assignment.
This is top of the line haiku. Welcome to YPDC and give us some more posts!!!!!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Apple Blossom
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 06:33:51 PM AEST
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Great write..
God Bless! |
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Re: Apple Blossom
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 05:01:46 PM AEST
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| I love how you presented this. The background info, the poem, the picture. It all just fits so nicely. Well done |
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