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And that
The loss of your touch makes me want to drive all night,
It’s almost memorizing the hold you had on me and what I’d do,

It’s odd to me that after all you said you felt the need to leave,
And that
Something deep inside you was compromising something good inside yourself,
In order to talk to me.

It’s crazy because I sit here and after all this I’m in shock you aren’t here,
And that,
Something just so little that is reminding,
Can bring me suddenly to tears.

It’s ironic that all the while I sat here thinking I was in control.
And that,
As soon as I realized you could get by without me,
I didn’t know where to go.

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Don't Go

Contributed by Lo2681 on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 02:36:49 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I could sit here all day and write about you,
And that
The loss of your touch makes me want to drive all night,
It’s almost memorizing the hold you had on me and what I’d do,

It’s odd to me that after all you said you felt the need to leave,
And that
Something deep inside you was compromising something good inside yourself,
In order to talk to me.

It’s crazy because I sit here and after all this I’m in shock you aren’t here,
And that,
Something just so little that is reminding,
Can bring me suddenly to tears.

It’s ironic that all the while I sat here thinking I was in control.
And that,
As soon as I realized you could get by without me,
I didn’t know where to go.

Copyright Â© Lo2681 ... [ 2006-05-14 02:36:49]
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Re: Don't Go (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 02:58:37 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
I can relate.
huggs,
emy

Re: Don't Go (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:48:59 AM AEST
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very touching and sad...your emotion shiines through in this.

wiz

Re: Don't Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Honesty_strikes_my_pen on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 12:50:51 PM AEST
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whoa..I've been there. youll get through
xo-honesty

Re: Don't Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 06:37:58 PM AEST
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that next level can be painful at times.... now its your turn to take that next step...you will be surprised how you can get along too.. RL

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