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So do I sit here and wait for knowledge to come? Do I just wait for a sign? I can’t keep waiting for something better…I can’;t sit here and think things are going to be different the next time around.
Kiss the blood goodbye.
Say words you don’t mean.
Just stop talking.
Forget the pain.
Just put the gun to your head and hope your aim is true. Just hope it’ll be fast cause you just don’t want to feel anymore.
Suffocate yourself. These days get darker and longer. Every word has to mean something or you’re gonna get it. Sorrow has no meaning. Emotion is dead.
So where do you put the grave? The ground isn’t deep enough. Just keeping digging till you hit another hell. Tell yourself it’s gonna be better on the other side cause it’s just not getting any better here.
You can say you love them, but there’s nothing left for you to love with. Your heart is stained a dark color and you’re beginning to see gray again.
The pain is unbearable, but you continue on, choking back words that you want to say. It’s just better to not say anything at all.
So as you stare into blackness and nothing comes you know you’re finally dead on the inside and yet still breathing.
You know it’s just not worth it anymore…words have failed you, finally. So your world goes down and you’re left speechless, with nothing to feel.
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When Words Fail You

Contributed by MG_Akela22090 on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:04:34 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

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So do I sit here and wait for knowledge to come? Do I just wait for a sign? I can’t keep waiting for something better…I can’;t sit here and think things are going to be different the next time around.
Kiss the blood goodbye.
Say words you don’t mean.
Just stop talking.
Forget the pain.
Just put the gun to your head and hope your aim is true. Just hope it’ll be fast cause you just don’t want to feel anymore.
Suffocate yourself. These days get darker and longer. Every word has to mean something or you’re gonna get it. Sorrow has no meaning. Emotion is dead.
So where do you put the grave? The ground isn’t deep enough. Just keeping digging till you hit another hell. Tell yourself it’s gonna be better on the other side cause it’s just not getting any better here.
You can say you love them, but there’s nothing left for you to love with. Your heart is stained a dark color and you’re beginning to see gray again.
The pain is unbearable, but you continue on, choking back words that you want to say. It’s just better to not say anything at all.
So as you stare into blackness and nothing comes you know you’re finally dead on the inside and yet still breathing.
You know it’s just not worth it anymore…words have failed you, finally. So your world goes down and you’re left speechless, with nothing to feel.

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Re: When Words Fail You (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:08:41 AM AEST
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Wow! Powerfully dark poem. Absolutely love the pic too. Something you took? Black and white photography is always so much prettier than color.
Megan(and her bun in the oven)

Re: When Words Fail You (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:55:58 AM AEST
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this is literally potent, i enjoyed it, you habe aniteresting use of words, or maybe it just where you sused them
"kiss the blood goodbye, just stop talking"

i liked that a lot. keep wriritng, yu got a knack for it.
xXx

~kei~

Re: When Words Fail You (User Rating: 1 )
by k2kdesigner on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 01:59:46 PM AEST
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Very good poem I love it ...good expressions and I know I feel like sometimes too...Keep up the good work

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