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Array ( [sid] => 119951 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => White Lies [time] => 2006-05-12 22:52:19 [hometext] => It is what it says :( Comments are appreciated. Thank you. [bodytext] => I take it back,
Everything I wrote,
“ I won’t do it again”
You said and I quote.

Stab my back as I turn it to you,
I was foolish to believe,
A word you said,
Everything except your mistake,
Erased from my head.

I want back the piece of my sanity,
You stole from me,
Almost lost everything I cared about,
Because of your stupidity.

Stab my back,
You aren’t hurting me your hurting yourself,
I look at you with pathetic eyes,
You should really get some help.

Insulting who I thought you were,
With white powder on your nose,
And with every lie you say to me,
I watch as it grows.

Stab my back in public now,
If it makes you feel like a man,
Hope you stabbed it right this time,
Because it was the last chance that you had.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 66 [informant] => Lo2681 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
White Lies

Contributed by Lo2681 on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



I take it back,
Everything I wrote,
“ I won’t do it again”
You said and I quote.

Stab my back as I turn it to you,
I was foolish to believe,
A word you said,
Everything except your mistake,
Erased from my head.

I want back the piece of my sanity,
You stole from me,
Almost lost everything I cared about,
Because of your stupidity.

Stab my back,
You aren’t hurting me your hurting yourself,
I look at you with pathetic eyes,
You should really get some help.

Insulting who I thought you were,
With white powder on your nose,
And with every lie you say to me,
I watch as it grows.

Stab my back in public now,
If it makes you feel like a man,
Hope you stabbed it right this time,
Because it was the last chance that you had.





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Re: White Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 11:00:42 PM AEST
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I can truly identify with this..I've lived thru it with my little brother. Touching write...
Thank you.
Jenni


Re: White Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 11:01:21 PM AEST
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I love the title of this and how apt it truly is! Clever.

Powerful words. I feel for you and the person you write
about. This sort of thing can not be easy.

You've put your feelings together in a most creative
and talented way, though. Great post!

~Breezy


Re: White Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 11:13:38 PM AEST
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I too can truly relate to this. Very powerful and I could really feel the raw emotion throughout as I read.

Well written and thank you for sharing that piece of your life. I think that takes courage.

Tim


Re: White Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 12:41:07 AM AEST
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the last stanx=zas is easily the best adn uis very heartfelt. its like, everything you were trying to say came out in those lines. painful and agry, i really like this write. keep it up.

xXx

~kei~


Re: White Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:24:01 AM AEST
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lots of hurt and pain here but presented in a necessary way. sorry 4 your sadness.


Ben




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