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Array ( [sid] => 119948 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Wish You Knew [time] => 2006-05-12 21:40:21 [hometext] => I'm not sure about the last few lines, any tips? All comments welcome, Thanks! [bodytext] => I wish I could tell you everything...
That I automatically smile
The instant I hear your name.
That your voice
Is my favorite song.
That I have memorized
Your entire wardrobe,
From every pair of jeans,
To every Zeppelin tee.
That I know your number by heart,
Even though I never call you.
That you give me a reason
To get out of bed in the morning
And drag myself to class.
That you make me forget
Every single imperfection I have,
And being myself with you
Comes totally natural.
That you give me the best days of my life
By just being there.
That every minute I'm with you
I wish I could freeze time
And never leave.
That no matter how hard I try,
I cannot stop smiling around you.
And that every time I look into those eyes,
I completely melt,
And fall in love
All over again.
I wish I could tell you everything,
But there's no way you'd understand.
I wish I could tell you everything,
But I don't want to lose you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Drapes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

I Wish You Knew

Contributed by Drapes on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:40:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I wish I could tell you everything...
That I automatically smile
The instant I hear your name.
That your voice
Is my favorite song.
That I have memorized
Your entire wardrobe,
From every pair of jeans,
To every Zeppelin tee.
That I know your number by heart,
Even though I never call you.
That you give me a reason
To get out of bed in the morning
And drag myself to class.
That you make me forget
Every single imperfection I have,
And being myself with you
Comes totally natural.
That you give me the best days of my life
By just being there.
That every minute I'm with you
I wish I could freeze time
And never leave.
That no matter how hard I try,
I cannot stop smiling around you.
And that every time I look into those eyes,
I completely melt,
And fall in love
All over again.
I wish I could tell you everything,
But there's no way you'd understand.
I wish I could tell you everything,
But I don't want to lose you.

Copyright © Drapes ... [ 2006-05-12 21:40:21]
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Re: I Wish You Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Young_Poet on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:55:36 PM AEST
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aww so sweet. Nice Piece.

Re: I Wish You Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 11:16:13 PM AEST
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Nice write. Touching:)

~Lo

Re: I Wish You Knew (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 02:59:21 PM AEST
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lol. go away...you people make me cry. i dont like how much of an effect words can have. and how you are so good with them.

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