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Let all your anguish out; release them off your chest
You mourned enough on your lost love
Now my heart is yours sweet little dove

I kiss the tears off your face
And drown you in my sweet embrace
Everything you ask for, to you I give
In a sweet harmony you and I live

So take my life, take everything
Through those meadows we dance and sing
Of a beauty …oh that is you
And love you shall renew

But the cruelty of this life persists
Where such happiness never exists
Once more, I sank your heart in pain
And my dearest pigeon is mournful yet again
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Mournful Pigeon

Contributed by Opium on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Calm my dearest, in my arms lay down to rest
Let all your anguish out; release them off your chest
You mourned enough on your lost love
Now my heart is yours sweet little dove

I kiss the tears off your face
And drown you in my sweet embrace
Everything you ask for, to you I give
In a sweet harmony you and I live

So take my life, take everything
Through those meadows we dance and sing
Of a beauty …oh that is you
And love you shall renew

But the cruelty of this life persists
Where such happiness never exists
Once more, I sank your heart in pain
And my dearest pigeon is mournful yet again

Copyright Â© Opium ... [ 2003-02-05 18:20:00]
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Re: Mournful Pigeon (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 08:46:21 PM AEST
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very capturing wording, thanks for sharing this piece of art

Re: Mournful Pigeon (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 08:10:18 AM AEST
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there's a point of view in this poem , the last stanza is what 's happenning a lot these days , bcoz of u men! leave those pigeons alone if u cant continue with them and if hurting is ur habbit :@per... :P
Gina

Re: Mournful Pigeon (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 05:43:15 PM AEST
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Oh this is so lovely ... and very real. I love how you went from "sweet little dove" to "mournful pigeon" ... perfect choice of words. Excellent write. .... Jan

Re: Mournful Pigeon (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:35:26 AM AEST
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i have to agree with Jan... the dove to the pigeon... this is so sad... beautifully written...

Re: Mournful Pigeon (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 09:45:57 AM AEST
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Very melancholy, but perfectly worded :) Great poem!

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