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Array ( [sid] => 119929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Bloody Romance [time] => 2006-05-12 15:07:28 [hometext] => Dedicated to dearly beloved [bodytext] => The moon is my inspiration
shining down on whats left of me
You made my life worth nothing
blue and black is all I see

It was over long ago
you should have moved on like me
but you were spying on us both
so many tears you couldn't see

You bind my wrists together
and blood is pouring down my arms
Why are you doing this to me?
If you love me why am I in harm?

The transparent knife
is stabbing through my heart
I feel your fingers around the handle
why are you tearing me apart

But when the transparent knife
is more real than it seems
I'll lie and say I love you
and you say we're now on different teams

And now my world is growing darker
and now the transparent knife
is full of blood and sorrow
I gave you my love and you took my life

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The Bloody Romance

Contributed by the_patron_saint on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 03:07:28 PM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

The moon is my inspiration
shining down on whats left of me
You made my life worth nothing
blue and black is all I see

It was over long ago
you should have moved on like me
but you were spying on us both
so many tears you couldn't see

You bind my wrists together
and blood is pouring down my arms
Why are you doing this to me?
If you love me why am I in harm?

The transparent knife
is stabbing through my heart
I feel your fingers around the handle
why are you tearing me apart

But when the transparent knife
is more real than it seems
I'll lie and say I love you
and you say we're now on different teams

And now my world is growing darker
and now the transparent knife
is full of blood and sorrow
I gave you my love and you took my life

Copyright © the_patron_saint ... [ 2006-05-12 15:07:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Bloody Romance (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 03:34:22 PM AEST
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whoa. dark..full of despair..fantastically written, i loved it.

~natalya

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