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Array ( [sid] => 119927 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Lover's Journal [time] => 2006-05-12 14:41:35 [hometext] => I didn't know if I should put it in love remembered or love/romantic poetry, but I put it in here anyway...If you don't understand it...the quotes is when the girl is reading the guys journal...every 2 stanzas is her thoughts [bodytext] => "She's so brilliant; I love her mind
She has captured my heart
A lovely face, I love her eyes
She rips my soul apart"

"I feel her pain, I hurt her too
Though I'd never try
my hopes and dreams consist of her
with a love that never dies"

Is he for real? Is this how he feels?
his words make me cry
I'm lying here and dying here
I am certain all love dies

"She doesn't know I live for her
or is this love a lie
that can't be true, it never will
Without her love I'd die"

"Her voice is of an angel
it's the only voice I hear
She's my fruit of eden
Forbidden and can't be real"

Is he insane? Or have no brain?
Can he not see?
I'm bleeding man with all I can
for our love will never be

"She doesn't understand my love
this love left on reserve
I breath her in; I love the smell
She touches my every nerve"

"Her face in mind; her lovely voice
I want her in my arms
She's tired I know, she needs some rest
And I can keep her from all harm"

In his arms? From all harm?
Yes I'm tired but NO!
A harmful life; love will die
His love will come and go

"I'll never falter from my love
I've never felt this way
Get rid of me? You cannot
Just like my love I'll stay"

"We'll never die if we love another
we will always remain
Love is fragile and must be protected
or all love is felt in vain"

My love grows, he'll never know
If I always hide
Yes; we will remain, through all the pain
Let love live deep inside. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 24 [informant] => hardrocker15198916 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
A Lover's Journal

Contributed by hardrocker15198916 on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 02:41:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



"She's so brilliant; I love her mind
She has captured my heart
A lovely face, I love her eyes
She rips my soul apart"

"I feel her pain, I hurt her too
Though I'd never try
my hopes and dreams consist of her
with a love that never dies"

Is he for real? Is this how he feels?
his words make me cry
I'm lying here and dying here
I am certain all love dies

"She doesn't know I live for her
or is this love a lie
that can't be true, it never will
Without her love I'd die"

"Her voice is of an angel
it's the only voice I hear
She's my fruit of eden
Forbidden and can't be real"

Is he insane? Or have no brain?
Can he not see?
I'm bleeding man with all I can
for our love will never be

"She doesn't understand my love
this love left on reserve
I breath her in; I love the smell
She touches my every nerve"

"Her face in mind; her lovely voice
I want her in my arms
She's tired I know, she needs some rest
And I can keep her from all harm"

In his arms? From all harm?
Yes I'm tired but NO!
A harmful life; love will die
His love will come and go

"I'll never falter from my love
I've never felt this way
Get rid of me? You cannot
Just like my love I'll stay"

"We'll never die if we love another
we will always remain
Love is fragile and must be protected
or all love is felt in vain"

My love grows, he'll never know
If I always hide
Yes; we will remain, through all the pain
Let love live deep inside.




Copyright © hardrocker15198916 ... [ 2006-05-12 14:41:35]
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Re: A Lover's Journal (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 02:46:21 PM AEST
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WOW. Beautiful!


Re: A Lover's Journal (User Rating: 1 )
by kaitee on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 02:57:08 PM AEST
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amazing.......

this is simply an amazing write



~Kaitee


Re: A Lover's Journal (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 05:25:56 PM AEST
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This is one of the best I had heard lately. I love the creativity behind it. Don't we wish we could read what anther thinks of us. This definatly brought up some thoughts for me. Thank you for sharing this. ~Lo




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