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Array ( [sid] => 119925 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I never will forget [time] => 2006-05-12 14:18:32 [hometext] => havent been writing long but wrote this after the death of my gradfather [bodytext] => Feels like a long long time since i looked into your eyes

I never will forget that look upon your face
As you just turned and left without a trace
I know you had to leave us all to be free
And I could cry if only you would come back to be with me
please..

I guess that i was blind to your pain
Thinking it would never happen
Wouldn't ever have to play that game

I know that it's love when its only my heart you can hear
I know you had to go away, its starting to become clear

Just want you to know that when you left
a part of me died
yet another blossomed

Im no longer the girl you knew
The tears i shed are fragments of the child you once held so close
Yet every tear is for you. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 48 [informant] => wildhorse [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I never will forget

Contributed by wildhorse on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 02:18:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Feels like a long long time since i looked into your eyes

I never will forget that look upon your face
As you just turned and left without a trace
I know you had to leave us all to be free
And I could cry if only you would come back to be with me
please..

I guess that i was blind to your pain
Thinking it would never happen
Wouldn't ever have to play that game

I know that it's love when its only my heart you can hear
I know you had to go away, its starting to become clear

Just want you to know that when you left
a part of me died
yet another blossomed

Im no longer the girl you knew
The tears i shed are fragments of the child you once held so close
Yet every tear is for you.

Copyright © wildhorse ... [ 2006-05-12 14:18:32]
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Re: I never will forget (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 02:24:17 PM AEST
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This is a very sweet write and certainly a fitting tribute to your grandfather. I'm very sorry for your loss. I know it's hard, but it's good you're turning a negative into a positive. :-)
Nice work.

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