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Array ( [sid] => 119901 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sad Composition [time] => 2006-05-12 00:16:44 [hometext] => Please comment and critisize, thanks [bodytext] => My life is like a sad song,
Never to be played again.

Only composed of sad notes,
Placed where they don’t belong.

My life is a sad poem,
Only read once then tossed.

Never to be spoken of,
A tale of a person alone.

I’m a lost composition,
Of deep emotions.

A person who’s life is sad,
And there was no transition.

Whose clouds never pulled away,
As the rain played their song.

When rain took over my life,
My world slowly bled to gray.

I always waited for the light,
For years on end.

But whenever there’s a dim glow,
It seems to run away in fright.

My life is like a sad song,
But without a happy end.

With notes placed,
Where they just don’t belong.

It’s a story only told once,
Where the person dies in sadness.

A person which no amount of happiness,
On the scale could bring the sadness, balance. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 43 [informant] => mild_tempest [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Sad Composition

Contributed by mild_tempest on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 12:16:44 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

My life is like a sad song,
Never to be played again.

Only composed of sad notes,
Placed where they don’t belong.

My life is a sad poem,
Only read once then tossed.

Never to be spoken of,
A tale of a person alone.

I’m a lost composition,
Of deep emotions.

A person who’s life is sad,
And there was no transition.

Whose clouds never pulled away,
As the rain played their song.

When rain took over my life,
My world slowly bled to gray.

I always waited for the light,
For years on end.

But whenever there’s a dim glow,
It seems to run away in fright.

My life is like a sad song,
But without a happy end.

With notes placed,
Where they just don’t belong.

It’s a story only told once,
Where the person dies in sadness.

A person which no amount of happiness,
On the scale could bring the sadness, balance.

Copyright Â© mild_tempest ... [ 2006-05-12 00:16:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sad Composition (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 12:38:19 AM AEST
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The structure was great. I felt the pain in your heart as I read your words. ~Lo

Re: Sad Composition (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:00:58 AM AEST
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beautifully sad!

nice post.

wiz

Re: Sad Composition (User Rating: 1 )
by samwrue on Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 04:24:47 PM AEST
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very good rhyming

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