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I'm trying to move on
I'm trying to remember
That what you did was wrong.
I'm trying not to break down
When I look into Emma's eyes
I'm trying to be the strong one
But my heart still wants to cry.
I feel something for another man
But my head still longs for you
I suppose I just need to forget
the good times we've been through.
I know I really feel for him
And it's here I want to stay
But you keep flooding my memories
I wish you'd go away.
It hurts to see your face
It tears me up to hear you name
I feel this pain that cuts so deep
I wish you'd hurt the same.
I wish you'd feel my agony
Your heart would bloody cry
You took my soul and destroyed my heart
Yet you still can't tell me why. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 298 [topic] => 48 [informant] => becca_au85 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Trying but still Hurting

Contributed by becca_au85 on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 10:34:36 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm trying to get over you
I'm trying to move on
I'm trying to remember
That what you did was wrong.
I'm trying not to break down
When I look into Emma's eyes
I'm trying to be the strong one
But my heart still wants to cry.
I feel something for another man
But my head still longs for you
I suppose I just need to forget
the good times we've been through.
I know I really feel for him
And it's here I want to stay
But you keep flooding my memories
I wish you'd go away.
It hurts to see your face
It tears me up to hear you name
I feel this pain that cuts so deep
I wish you'd hurt the same.
I wish you'd feel my agony
Your heart would bloody cry
You took my soul and destroyed my heart
Yet you still can't tell me why.

Copyright Â© becca_au85 ... [ 2006-05-10 22:34:36]
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Re: Trying but still Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 10:48:13 PM AEST
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I feel your pain becca-
stay true to yourself..and above all, stay strong.

great write..

B

Re: Trying but still Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 11:28:11 PM AEST
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Becca, your expression of hurt is greatly shown, but you must stay strong for Emma’s sake.

sadaddy

Re: Trying but still Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 01:31:52 AM AEST
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Very sad but certainly understandable and really well written.
Hang tuff, big huggs,
emy

Re: Trying but still Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 03:46:07 AM AEST
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Can feel how you feel, been through the same, brilliant poem xxx

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