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Array ( [sid] => 119829 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm always the one who put my feeling aside! [time] => 2006-05-10 19:49:47 [hometext] => Havent written a poem in quiet a while , this is alittle ruff around the edges but i think its ok , the peom is expressing real feelings though.. [bodytext] => My heart and Mind are torn in two.
On the one hand there my bestfriend, on the other there's you.
And now my friends I need advice to pick, Who.
If you were in my position, What would you do?

On the one hand my bestfriend,
And I seriously dont want our friendship to end.
He does have his flaws, like any guy.
Seemingly always constantly High.
He taught me theres more to life, than Work and responsiblity.
Showed me that life was mine, and I was free.
We have each other backs most of the time,
and all our arguements always turn out fine.
Until now...

I dont know what to do, Cause Girl I seriously think im in love with you.
And I know what your thinking, And this girl is, Who?
My bestfriends Ex, Yeah I know what your thinking, Whats the matter with me?
And I tell you friends, I totally agree.
But I know she loves me to,
And help me people, cause i just dont know what to do.

I mean i guess its okay, since my friend never treated her right anyway.
but he is my friend and I know deep down he loved her, so its not Okay, to Love you today.
On the other hand he seems to have moved on,
To this girl of which he's rather fond.
And Some may say all's fair in love and war,
but this is like a unwritten law,
'You don't date you friends ex's.'

But I'm always the one who put my feeling aside!
And if he's really my friend, Our friendship will survive.
But god that not my answer, i dunno who to chose,
either way I think that I lose..

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I'm always the one who put my feeling aside!

Contributed by His_Infernal_Majesty on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 07:49:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

My heart and Mind are torn in two.
On the one hand there my bestfriend, on the other there's you.
And now my friends I need advice to pick, Who.
If you were in my position, What would you do?

On the one hand my bestfriend,
And I seriously dont want our friendship to end.
He does have his flaws, like any guy.
Seemingly always constantly High.
He taught me theres more to life, than Work and responsiblity.
Showed me that life was mine, and I was free.
We have each other backs most of the time,
and all our arguements always turn out fine.
Until now...

I dont know what to do, Cause Girl I seriously think im in love with you.
And I know what your thinking, And this girl is, Who?
My bestfriends Ex, Yeah I know what your thinking, Whats the matter with me?
And I tell you friends, I totally agree.
But I know she loves me to,
And help me people, cause i just dont know what to do.

I mean i guess its okay, since my friend never treated her right anyway.
but he is my friend and I know deep down he loved her, so its not Okay, to Love you today.
On the other hand he seems to have moved on,
To this girl of which he's rather fond.
And Some may say all's fair in love and war,
but this is like a unwritten law,
'You don't date you friends ex's.'

But I'm always the one who put my feeling aside!
And if he's really my friend, Our friendship will survive.
But god that not my answer, i dunno who to chose,
either way I think that I lose..

Copyright © His_Infernal_Majesty ... [ 2006-05-10 19:49:47]
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Re: I'm always the one who put my feeling aside! (User Rating: 1 )
by ek_da_poet on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 08:13:55 PM AEST
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this was well written and flowed just great

Re: I'm always the one who put my feeling aside! (User Rating: 1 )
by ek_da_poet on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 08:14:01 PM AEST
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this was well written and flowed just great

Re: I'm always the one who put my feeling aside! (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 08:20:48 PM AEST
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amazing...I know what u mean.

~Lo

Re: I'm always the one who put my feeling aside! (User Rating: 1 )
by becca_au85 on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 10:39:40 PM AEST
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i understand where your coming from i was once that girl caught between two friends but u guys r adults and your friend should stick by you no matter what.
great write

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