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Array ( [sid] => 119790 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'll-Fated Opportunity [time] => 2006-05-10 01:46:54 [hometext] => Being bored and writing poem........just a thought ...... [bodytext] => This is a story of regret, confusion and love,
An ill-fated opportunity that was full of corruption,

A tale of a girl, who had a childish hope,
Filled with betrayal and confusion thought,

She loved him dearly, but he was only playing with her heart,
Their prior relationship was filled with memorable stories,

Theirs was a tale no one but the two understood,
Terrible words twisted into drama and confusion thoughts,

Out of this confusion, what was the dreadful cost?
The girl heart ripped out thinking he loved her back,

The friendship they had, vanishing little by little,
No more conversation shared or special moments,

The boy emit the girl, not caring how she loved him,
Not realizing the girl cried everyday wanting to be with him,

She waited desperately for him to change his mind,
Trying her best to repair her heartbroken heart,

But the boy never cared to return her affection,
Everyday she prayed that he would love her back,

After months of torture for his love,
The boy had no intention of coming back to her,

She realized she could never love another person,
She couldn’t take it anymore, she took some deadly risk.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ruthie1983 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I'll-Fated Opportunity

Contributed by ruthie1983 on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 01:46:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

This is a story of regret, confusion and love,
An ill-fated opportunity that was full of corruption,

A tale of a girl, who had a childish hope,
Filled with betrayal and confusion thought,

She loved him dearly, but he was only playing with her heart,
Their prior relationship was filled with memorable stories,

Theirs was a tale no one but the two understood,
Terrible words twisted into drama and confusion thoughts,

Out of this confusion, what was the dreadful cost?
The girl heart ripped out thinking he loved her back,

The friendship they had, vanishing little by little,
No more conversation shared or special moments,

The boy emit the girl, not caring how she loved him,
Not realizing the girl cried everyday wanting to be with him,

She waited desperately for him to change his mind,
Trying her best to repair her heartbroken heart,

But the boy never cared to return her affection,
Everyday she prayed that he would love her back,

After months of torture for his love,
The boy had no intention of coming back to her,

She realized she could never love another person,
She couldn’t take it anymore, she took some deadly risk.

Copyright Â© ruthie1983 ... [ 2006-05-10 01:46:54]
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Re: I'll-Fated Opportunity (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 01:57:43 AM AEST
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nicely written, sad but true.

sadaddy

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