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Array ( [sid] => 119789 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Be [time] => 2006-05-10 01:33:06 [hometext] => just wrote it. it's written kinda weird, but it works. [bodytext] => be the one that makes me smile
the one i give my heart to
the one that brings out my inner child

be the one that i take to the mall
the one that i pick up when you fall
the one that will always make my heart stall

be the one that stares at the stars with me
the one that makes me better when i weep
the one i will always think of as long as i breathe

be the one that i commit my entire life to
the one that misses me seconds after i leave you
the one that pinches me to show me this love is true

just be the one little lady that makes me cry
when we're apart in the middle of the night
the one that makes me smile
as i sit in rush hour traffic
be the girl that makes me whole
and i will promise to never make you regret it

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lonely_boy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Just Be

Contributed by lonely_boy on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 01:33:06 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

be the one that makes me smile
the one i give my heart to
the one that brings out my inner child

be the one that i take to the mall
the one that i pick up when you fall
the one that will always make my heart stall

be the one that stares at the stars with me
the one that makes me better when i weep
the one i will always think of as long as i breathe

be the one that i commit my entire life to
the one that misses me seconds after i leave you
the one that pinches me to show me this love is true

just be the one little lady that makes me cry
when we're apart in the middle of the night
the one that makes me smile
as i sit in rush hour traffic
be the girl that makes me whole
and i will promise to never make you regret it

Copyright © lonely_boy ... [ 2006-05-10 01:33:06]
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Re: Just Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Sasha on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 03:59:54 AM AEST
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One word, wow! I absolutely love this poem.

Sasha

Re: Just Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:00:02 AM AEST
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aww... this is really sweet. i hope u find her.
~ Lo

Re: Just Be (User Rating: 1 )
by JarrodLuke on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 11:02:03 AM AEST
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i thought this poem was really awesome. i hope you do find who your looking for

Jarrod

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