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Array ( [sid] => 119755 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => YoUr SuIcIdE [time] => 2006-05-09 16:23:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What do you do when you world comes crashing down
when every moment of everyday the universe decides to fall around you
In a moment of inequitable sadness
Never ending never beginning
Just a life of eternal condemnation for a crime uncommitted
When nothing can be done but wait in the vain hope of release of your pain?
When minutes pass by slower then lifetimes
But the pain is eternally ongoing
When you close your eyes you imagine an immediate conclusion
Of a life unlived
As the blood flows from your wrists never ending
you imagined all the memories inanimately lived
Unimaginable joys you have yet to commence
All the lives you leave untouched
All the things you left unsaid
Now you leave yourself and others nothing better but for dead
But your ignorance was your loss of faith
Your blood was oblivious to your foolishness
Your unborn child was unaware of your tribulations
I hope you enjoy your life in a place void of pain
Where I and others must live in a void place of you.

[comments] => 0 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 36 [informant] => tearz992 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
YoUr SuIcIdE

Contributed by tearz992 on Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 04:23:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



What do you do when you world comes crashing down
when every moment of everyday the universe decides to fall around you
In a moment of inequitable sadness
Never ending never beginning
Just a life of eternal condemnation for a crime uncommitted
When nothing can be done but wait in the vain hope of release of your pain?
When minutes pass by slower then lifetimes
But the pain is eternally ongoing
When you close your eyes you imagine an immediate conclusion
Of a life unlived
As the blood flows from your wrists never ending
you imagined all the memories inanimately lived
Unimaginable joys you have yet to commence
All the lives you leave untouched
All the things you left unsaid
Now you leave yourself and others nothing better but for dead
But your ignorance was your loss of faith
Your blood was oblivious to your foolishness
Your unborn child was unaware of your tribulations
I hope you enjoy your life in a place void of pain
Where I and others must live in a void place of you.





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