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I swear it
All them worries you have
Just bear it

Ill take care of it
Itll all be alright
He wont touch you again
Ill beat him just right

Please, don’t cry baby
You will make me cry to
If you make me cry
Ill kill him for you

No, I shouldn’t kill him
I just want to protect you
Friggin rapist wont touch you again
Ill cat his hands off of him

Im sorry girl, don’t listen to me
Im sorry you have to see me angry
Don’t worry baby im her
Come on girl, come over to me

Hey girl, give me a hug
A simple squeeze to help your problems
Even if you cry all night
Ill be here, making it alright
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 43 [informant] => big_B [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

It's Alright

Contributed by big_B on Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 03:45:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

No one will hurt you
I swear it
All them worries you have
Just bear it

Ill take care of it
Itll all be alright
He wont touch you again
Ill beat him just right

Please, don’t cry baby
You will make me cry to
If you make me cry
Ill kill him for you

No, I shouldn’t kill him
I just want to protect you
Friggin rapist wont touch you again
Ill cat his hands off of him

Im sorry girl, don’t listen to me
Im sorry you have to see me angry
Don’t worry baby im her
Come on girl, come over to me

Hey girl, give me a hug
A simple squeeze to help your problems
Even if you cry all night
Ill be here, making it alright

Copyright Â© big_B ... [ 2006-05-09 15:45:41]
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Re: It's Alright (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 07:24:35 PM AEST
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I like that line

"He won't touch you again
I'll beat him just right."

It had a hint of connotation for reason and restraint
belied though by some gruesome thoughts that went back to reason and a little calmer and collected restraint not lackin' resolve to protect. Not bad fer a kid. Talk to ya in a pm.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: It's Alright (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:33:46 AM AEST
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I think this is a good try. I can really feel your words in this one (although some of them are misspelled) This is not bad.

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