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Array ( [sid] => 119720 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bitter-Sweet Nectar [time] => 2006-05-08 20:23:53 [hometext] => I guess this could be looked at in a grotesque, sort of dark way. But I don't see it that way in the least and I hope someone can see the romance that I felt leak into this poem, because it has flooded me. [bodytext] => Already, I can feel the heat of your velvet flesh
Thin and pale, stretched over throbbing crimson
Your heart's rhythm trapped under my parched lips
And your pleasure-soaked scream beneath my piercing pearls
Already, I can taste your bitter-sweet liquid life
Feel it upon my rose-stained tongue
Like a nectar from Heaven for only you and me
Coppery warmth caressing my stone-filled throat
Already, I can see your love-misted eyes,
Exposing all that you try so damn hard to hide
The harnessed lust locked deep within your soul
Your intensified adoration that you never thought I would drag out

And I will kiss those lips you bit so deep and fervently to drown the pain and fight the emotion
So that you can taste our bitter-sweet nectar and understand that this is how it's meant to be



And you don't need to fight it anymore. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Jane_Doe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Bitter-Sweet Nectar

Contributed by Jane_Doe on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 08:23:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Already, I can feel the heat of your velvet flesh
Thin and pale, stretched over throbbing crimson
Your heart's rhythm trapped under my parched lips
And your pleasure-soaked scream beneath my piercing pearls
Already, I can taste your bitter-sweet liquid life
Feel it upon my rose-stained tongue
Like a nectar from Heaven for only you and me
Coppery warmth caressing my stone-filled throat
Already, I can see your love-misted eyes,
Exposing all that you try so damn hard to hide
The harnessed lust locked deep within your soul
Your intensified adoration that you never thought I would drag out

And I will kiss those lips you bit so deep and fervently to drown the pain and fight the emotion
So that you can taste our bitter-sweet nectar and understand that this is how it's meant to be



And you don't need to fight it anymore.




Copyright © Jane_Doe ... [ 2006-05-08 20:23:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Bitter-Sweet Nectar (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 10:02:43 PM AEST
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Whooaaaaaaaaaaa! Cowboy say this be pedigree poetry! Glad I met Jane_Doe today!

This sucker be gripping and dripping with coherent depth ... and such a "parched lips" passion that WHO (in their right mind) WOULD WANT TO FIGHT IT ANYMORE???

My multi-compliments, Ms Jane_Doe

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy


Re: Bitter-Sweet Nectar (User Rating: 1 )
by Sparkz16 on Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 02:35:51 PM AEST
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i definatly felt the romance in it ppl who put it out to be a grotesque sort of dark way are lost and confused in there own little way sick minds lol nice work of art


Amanda
Sparkz16


Re: Bitter-Sweet Nectar (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 02:08:19 AM AEST
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Wow this is very breath taking. I like the message. I can relate to this. Very nicely done. And good title:)

~Lo




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