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draw attention from the pain
that I've felt for so long
where did things go so wrong?

I don't know why I kept my feelings inside
Not even in you could I confide.
Everyday I search for the reasons why
I just sat back and watched you cry

I know our past wasn't always that great
but all I ask is don't wipe the slate
Try to remember the times that were bright
and know that through you, my heart takes flight [comments] => 6 [counter] => 467 [topic] => 50 [informant] => PoeticHybrid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

To You...

Contributed by PoeticHybrid on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 05:42:14 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Rapid little sounds of rain
draw attention from the pain
that I've felt for so long
where did things go so wrong?

I don't know why I kept my feelings inside
Not even in you could I confide.
Everyday I search for the reasons why
I just sat back and watched you cry

I know our past wasn't always that great
but all I ask is don't wipe the slate
Try to remember the times that were bright
and know that through you, my heart takes flight

Copyright © PoeticHybrid ... [ 2006-05-08 17:42:14]
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Re: To You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimberlynn on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 05:55:28 PM AEST
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Good job, keep writing.

Re: To You... (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Young_Poet on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 07:08:06 PM AEST
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I like it. Nice Piece.

Re: To You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 08:04:15 PM AEST
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nicely done. i like your rhymes, they flow well. welcome to YPCD, i hope you like it here. i hope that who ever this is for accepts your apology.

Re: To You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 04:14:25 PM AEST
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Nice job, it has a good flow.
-Drapes

Re: To You... (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 08:22:06 PM AEST
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I hear ya man, my life is paralell of this poem. Always just outside, never enough courage to say what I need to....until its too late.

Re: To You... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovestruck on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 10:45:02 PM AEST
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i've been in a situation like this ...hopefully this person will be understanding and forgiving afterall isnt that what a relationship is? nice write

lovestruck

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