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Array ( [sid] => 119701 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sick 'Love' [time] => 2006-05-08 16:48:38 [hometext] => its a rare case only among girls, i was incredibly bored so i force myself to write. comments appriciated [bodytext] => You say you are in love
You want to believe it too
But to love that one
You must change who is you

Binge, purge
This love diet of yours
Let this love emerge
What was never ours

Don’t you dare eat that
He won’t love you if you do
Fit in those designer clothes
Just to say, “I love you too”

Kiss and tell
He’s in your every thought
Let “love” out of its shell
But there is more pain to be brought

Keep in mind: no ones perfect
He commented on your jean size
You shouldn’t care what anyone thinks
You have your own eyes

It’s good you want to impress him
It’s typical of girls our age
Self conciseness leads to development
But it shouldn’t be a war to wage

Please do me and you a favor both
Let go of your love
Get the girl I knew back
Because when push comes to shove
Its not personality you lack

You said you were in love
You had to believe it too
Don’t love that one
Don’t let anyone change you

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Sick 'Love'

Contributed by SmileSkinDeep on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:48:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You say you are in love
You want to believe it too
But to love that one
You must change who is you

Binge, purge
This love diet of yours
Let this love emerge
What was never ours

Don’t you dare eat that
He won’t love you if you do
Fit in those designer clothes
Just to say, “I love you too”

Kiss and tell
He’s in your every thought
Let “love” out of its shell
But there is more pain to be brought

Keep in mind: no ones perfect
He commented on your jean size
You shouldn’t care what anyone thinks
You have your own eyes

It’s good you want to impress him
It’s typical of girls our age
Self conciseness leads to development
But it shouldn’t be a war to wage

Please do me and you a favor both
Let go of your love
Get the girl I knew back
Because when push comes to shove
Its not personality you lack

You said you were in love
You had to believe it too
Don’t love that one
Don’t let anyone change you





Copyright © SmileSkinDeep ... [ 2006-05-08 16:48:38]
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Re: Sick 'Love' (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Young_Poet on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:57:56 PM AEST
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maybe rare, but true. Nice piece.


Re: Sick 'Love' (User Rating: 1 )
by kaitee on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 05:00:49 PM AEST
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how right is this one...
many young giris of this youth need to read this, listen to it, and follow it.

Amazingly true write...good job


~Kaitee


Re: Sick 'Love' (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 05:49:33 PM AEST
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Very nice write. You hit the nail on the head as they say. I think this goes beyond age, and should be read by any of those who have body image issues.




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