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Array ( [sid] => 11964 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Choices [time] => 2003-02-05 06:00:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem after I realized I gave my heart to the wrong guy. [bodytext] => Like a withered flower seeks raindrops,
Like a land of darkness needs light,
I wanted you as my redeemer,
I needed you in my sight.

Yet how is it that it seems,
You turned out so differently,
You played villian in all the scenes,
And now I doubt your sincerity.

Entering into my crumbling life,
I hoped you'd bring me strength,
But as I watch your unfolding lies,
I realize I'm losing my stand.

And now as I sit here in thought,
You are the biggest mistake I made,
For into my saddened life you brought,
Confusion, anguish and hate.

So the withered flower will die,
The land of darkness still as night,
Until I find one who truly cares,
Until my choices are right. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 48 [informant] => blueheart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Choices

Contributed by blueheart on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Like a withered flower seeks raindrops,
Like a land of darkness needs light,
I wanted you as my redeemer,
I needed you in my sight.

Yet how is it that it seems,
You turned out so differently,
You played villian in all the scenes,
And now I doubt your sincerity.

Entering into my crumbling life,
I hoped you'd bring me strength,
But as I watch your unfolding lies,
I realize I'm losing my stand.

And now as I sit here in thought,
You are the biggest mistake I made,
For into my saddened life you brought,
Confusion, anguish and hate.

So the withered flower will die,
The land of darkness still as night,
Until I find one who truly cares,
Until my choices are right.

Copyright © blueheart ... [ 2003-02-05 06:00:00]
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Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 09:10:55 AM AEST
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excellent write, you will find someone true and genuine:)

Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 04:30:32 PM AEST
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Great poem ... I know these feelings well and you have captured them perfectly.

Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:47:45 AM AEST
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Well, life may be saddening at times but hope you'll get better from your sadness. You'll make it through... yes you will.

Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by Qohinoor on Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 08:52:06 PM AEST
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Well then, have no fear-there are as many people to choose from as there are many fish in the sea. So don't worry, be happy!

Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:18:15 AM AEST
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Excellent write, although i found it quite sad. I think sometimes you have to experience the wrong guys in order to find the right guy you are looking for. Need something to compare to. The world is young, still many good choices out there.

Re: Choices (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:31:12 PM AEST
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I am sure things will work out for you. Keep your heart and your mind open and the right guy will come along. *S* Cynthia

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