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I told you i hated you..but really i needed you..
you told me you loved me but really you didnt..you used me and abused me..
you played with me then left me,
as if i was yesterdays dream stuck in this stream of loveing you and needing you..
you made me believe all your stupid lies and made me cry..
just like you left me i am leaving you, but dont worry im not walking or running,
i am dieing, slowly in your web of lies that made me cry...
so here is my goodbye............... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Sparkz16 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

my goodbye

Contributed by Sparkz16 on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 04:10:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

All the times we used to laugh and play are all gone like yesterday
I told you i hated you..but really i needed you..
you told me you loved me but really you didnt..you used me and abused me..
you played with me then left me,
as if i was yesterdays dream stuck in this stream of loveing you and needing you..
you made me believe all your stupid lies and made me cry..
just like you left me i am leaving you, but dont worry im not walking or running,
i am dieing, slowly in your web of lies that made me cry...
so here is my goodbye...............

Copyright © Sparkz16 ... [ 2006-05-05 16:10:17]
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Re: my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by kaitee on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 06:22:14 PM AEST
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what a sad poem. i felt the emotion as i read it.......

~Kaitee

Re: my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 06:28:50 PM AEST
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why are all the sad ones the good ones?

Re: my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 11:03:42 PM AEST
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I liked this. There's alot of pain in this tale of deceit. But then again, there usually is. You told the story well. It had a good flow.
"I am dying , slowly in your web of lies that made me cry..." Something I wish I could come up with. lol
James says he liked this also. ;o)
Good Job, Sweetie!
Luv and Peace to ya
Gramma Thumps ;o)

Re: my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 02:44:32 AM AEST
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I agree with spider. "Why are all the sad ones the good ones?"

I have read all of the poems that you have written, and I believe its all love and loss. I wish you didn't feel so bad.

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