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Array ( [sid] => 119549 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Saviour [time] => 2006-05-05 15:13:00 [hometext] => For my grandad, he was my world, say a prayer for him, he died oct o5. xxx lv vee xx [bodytext] => I watched you suffer
Tears running down my face
I saw your heart fading
And the shadow take its place
I cradled you gently
I tried to take away your pain
I spoke so softly to you
And lovingly called your name.

I wrote this for your love
To the memory of your face
To how you stood by me
When everyone else walked away
The way you held me close
And whispered its alright
That love is what i'll remember
In the long lonley nights

Your beautiful wisdom
The way you made me laugh in the rain
That is what will stand by me
And shield out all the pain
That happy smile upon your lips
That will take me through it all
And your arms that flew out to catch me
When i headed for a fall

To everyone you are their angel
Keeping them clear of harm
To me you are my saviour
Keeping me warm and calm.
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My Saviour

Contributed by torn_into_pieces-vee on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:13:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I watched you suffer
Tears running down my face
I saw your heart fading
And the shadow take its place
I cradled you gently
I tried to take away your pain
I spoke so softly to you
And lovingly called your name.

I wrote this for your love
To the memory of your face
To how you stood by me
When everyone else walked away
The way you held me close
And whispered its alright
That love is what i'll remember
In the long lonley nights

Your beautiful wisdom
The way you made me laugh in the rain
That is what will stand by me
And shield out all the pain
That happy smile upon your lips
That will take me through it all
And your arms that flew out to catch me
When i headed for a fall

To everyone you are their angel
Keeping them clear of harm
To me you are my saviour
Keeping me warm and calm.

Copyright © torn_into_pieces-vee ... [ 2006-05-05 15:13:00]
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Re: My Saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:40:44 PM AEST
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Nice write. The rythem was a bit off, but it was still really enjoyable. I liked it, good inspiration.
Takes you away from all the emotional tragicness (if thats a word) that i've lately been reading.
Keep up the good work
-Trini

Re: My Saviour (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 06:37:50 PM AEST
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Heart-breaking.
But our loved ones are always with us, even when they pass on. They do not stop loving us, their love is increased by the love of God.
I understand your pain.
We all suffer when we lose a loved one.
Love and peace
Elizabeth

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