Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:30:44 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 119538 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FAKE FRIENDS [time] => 2006-05-05 08:59:58 [hometext] => COMMENTS ARE LOVED [bodytext] => FAKE FRIENDS

what we need is truth
not backstabers
we want the ones that will know
know when were down
know when were happy
kno when were in need of someone
we dont need them jealus friends
the ones that leave you
the ones that tear you apart
make you mad
cheat
trade
and turn on you
with them the world is full
and it aint easy
to find people like that
that want to stay
who wont be dumb
who wont backstab you
who wont be a enemy
now if you are them
why be my friend
and ruin my life
dessert away far from this place
as fast as you can
becouse i really dont need you
and you dont need me
dont act fake
be real with me and tell me
becouse you aint goin anywere
FAKE FRIENDS

BY BRANDEN GOODRICH [comments] => 5 [counter] => 354 [topic] => 43 [informant] => BEE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

FAKE FRIENDS

Contributed by BEE on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 08:59:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

FAKE FRIENDS

what we need is truth
not backstabers
we want the ones that will know
know when were down
know when were happy
kno when were in need of someone
we dont need them jealus friends
the ones that leave you
the ones that tear you apart
make you mad
cheat
trade
and turn on you
with them the world is full
and it aint easy
to find people like that
that want to stay
who wont be dumb
who wont backstab you
who wont be a enemy
now if you are them
why be my friend
and ruin my life
dessert away far from this place
as fast as you can
becouse i really dont need you
and you dont need me
dont act fake
be real with me and tell me
becouse you aint goin anywere
FAKE FRIENDS

BY BRANDEN GOODRICH

Copyright © BEE ... [ 2006-05-05 08:59:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: FAKE FRIENDS (User Rating: 1 )
by kaitee on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 10:52:15 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

if only everyone could read this......there would be less people in the world.---"dessert away far from this place..."

~Kaitee

Re: FAKE FRIENDS (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 10:00:51 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Since you are asking for comments.....again, just wanted to say, if you use spellcheck, I think you would be taken more seriously. Take the time to look up the words. It teaches you more words. I'm 41 and never, ever hesitate to use the dictionary or the encyclopedia. I still learn from many great poets here at YPDC, as well, every single day. Peace, Laura

Re: FAKE FRIENDS (User Rating: 1 )
by mindset on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:19:02 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

oh my here we go again the corperate clones with their spell checks, this goes out to the author.

I felt ya inside spillin all over my screen stuff these tarts with their so so clean spellin and their so called we know what we on about, read their efforts lol....

leave them spellin alone shows the time the feel and leaves nothing to explain..

nice write....

And nice flow from inside on "truth"

Re: FAKE FRIENDS (User Rating: 1 )
by mindset on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:20:20 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

deadheadknowit.

You think this comes from books :)

Re: FAKE FRIENDS (User Rating: 1 )
by SIMMI on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 03:40:28 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i love dis 1
dat ***** real n so true
i kno wat u sayin

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com