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Array ( [sid] => 119525 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Inspiration [time] => 2006-05-04 23:54:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The pleasant experience
Of concentration
The passing on of
Inspiration
In this ever-moving
energy exchange

To both receive
And send out signals
evolving our collective
consciousness
To forget fear
And embrace change

I want to tell you something
I want to tell you everything

Tell me again
How it is you got here
I'll turn around
And tell you the same

Maybe we'll figure out
Why it is we met here
What it unlocks and
allows us to reclaim

Of what we've forgotten
Both here and beyond
Enhancing each other
As we absorb and respond

I want you to tell me something
I want you to tell me everything

The shedding of
All these restrictions
The forgetting of
All these afflictions
Setting aside all this
pomp and convention
The simple act of
Us breathing together

I want us to talk of something
I want us to talk of everything [comments] => 9 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 43 [informant] => xnoybis [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 27 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Inspiration

Contributed by xnoybis on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:54:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The pleasant experience
Of concentration
The passing on of
Inspiration
In this ever-moving
energy exchange

To both receive
And send out signals
evolving our collective
consciousness
To forget fear
And embrace change

I want to tell you something
I want to tell you everything

Tell me again
How it is you got here
I'll turn around
And tell you the same

Maybe we'll figure out
Why it is we met here
What it unlocks and
allows us to reclaim

Of what we've forgotten
Both here and beyond
Enhancing each other
As we absorb and respond

I want you to tell me something
I want you to tell me everything

The shedding of
All these restrictions
The forgetting of
All these afflictions
Setting aside all this
pomp and convention
The simple act of
Us breathing together

I want us to talk of something
I want us to talk of everything

Copyright © xnoybis ... [ 2006-05-04 23:54:50]
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Re: Inspiration (User Rating: 1 )
by rick317 on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 12:28:51 AM AEST
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Well Said!

Re: Inspiration (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:11:43 AM AEST
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So heavenly beautifull!
huggs,
emy

Re: Inspiration (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:12:16 AM AEST
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So heavenly beautifull!
huggs,
emy

Re: Inspiration (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:14:39 AM AEST
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I like it. The theme of opening up and sharing hopes and sorrows, fire and water, is well conveyed. And just one of my favorite issues, anyway. Keep it up.

Andrew

Re: Inspiration (User Rating: 1 )
by zelator on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 02:47:56 AM AEST
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i really like this...it talks of something more meaningful than the obvious

Re: Inspiration (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 05:18:39 AM AEST
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A beautiful write, well done

Re: Inspiration (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 01:54:41 PM AEST
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Great Write.!
Should be read by everyone.
So applicable to our day.!
Thanks for sharing
Elizabeth

Re: Inspiration (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:02:25 PM AEST
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This is nice.

I love the repetition. It's so simple, but says a lot. The last two lines of the stanza before the end are really good too. Also simply beautiful.

Great write,
*hugs*
Phyllis xxx

Re: Inspiration (User Rating: 1 )
by mindset on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:22:31 PM AEST
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Only the start from this fellow being found whats inside and now can express the free......

well done

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