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Array ( [sid] => 119524 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever to Be Desired [time] => 2006-05-04 23:45:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I feel like I am dead
My eyes flash in and out of my body
I am raw, incomplete

Do you want to feel me?
Your hands like satin on my skin
This elusive touch that never holds
As my mind bends until it shatters

I like to breathe stale air
It's all I can feel
My mouth wide open
In search of a redemption that bleeds
Like my twisted salvation

And I need it
Whole and undone
Within me, cursing my veins with a seduction
buried deep and hollowed out

I clasp his hands
as if they were wounds
Bloody and torn
My pain, my sorrow
Exposed in a cut,
a slice divine

I live within my own angers
fighting a battle, a disease
My own enemies
I conquer the hunger
The craving of mercy
etched into my heart

Yet the presence of mercy
faded long ago.....forever to be desired [comments] => 2 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Inevitable [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Forever to Be Desired

Contributed by Inevitable on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:45:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel like I am dead
My eyes flash in and out of my body
I am raw, incomplete

Do you want to feel me?
Your hands like satin on my skin
This elusive touch that never holds
As my mind bends until it shatters

I like to breathe stale air
It's all I can feel
My mouth wide open
In search of a redemption that bleeds
Like my twisted salvation

And I need it
Whole and undone
Within me, cursing my veins with a seduction
buried deep and hollowed out

I clasp his hands
as if they were wounds
Bloody and torn
My pain, my sorrow
Exposed in a cut,
a slice divine

I live within my own angers
fighting a battle, a disease
My own enemies
I conquer the hunger
The craving of mercy
etched into my heart

Yet the presence of mercy
faded long ago.....forever to be desired

Copyright © Inevitable ... [ 2006-05-04 23:45:05]
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Re: Forever to Be Desired (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 05:19:55 AM AEST
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well done , well written

Re: Forever to Be Desired (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 03:06:33 PM AEST
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I like this a lot. It's different than the usual 'I hate myself, I feel dead' writes that I find on here.

This poem is actually very creative, and a lot of it stood out to me.

I love how the style changes so much in the middle.

Very well written.
Phyllis xxx

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