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Why do they call this a funhouse?
The purpose is to distort reality
My life has become just that
Distorted


The mirrors and smoke
Are the lies and deceit
That I find in all
The people I meet
I wish I could trust you
How do I know you’re not fake too?


When life is a travesty
What can you do?
I try to stay true to myself
But I can’t trust you


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Funhouse

Contributed by randumbchit on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 07:00:32 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



Funhouse?
Why do they call this a funhouse?
The purpose is to distort reality
My life has become just that
Distorted


The mirrors and smoke
Are the lies and deceit
That I find in all
The people I meet
I wish I could trust you
How do I know you’re not fake too?


When life is a travesty
What can you do?
I try to stay true to myself
But I can’t trust you






Copyright © randumbchit ... [ 2006-05-04 07:00:32]
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Re: Funhouse (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 08:20:53 AM AEST
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Amen!!! I can't trust you either!!! Very true... the last stanza is great. Good write.

Haq.


Re: Funhouse (User Rating: 1 )
by brooken_22 on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 10:53:20 AM AEST
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excellent write.....i loved the simile......very nice......brooken_22


Re: Funhouse (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 01:11:15 PM AEST
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well written indeed. thank you.


Re: Funhouse (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 09:13:21 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem. The first stanza just lays it all out for the reader. Great concept.




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