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I who have nothing to offer anybody anymore

I feel it is time that i closed the door

Just do not be alarmed I still have lots to give

But feeling un-needed why continue to live

This past 12 months has been an eye opener to me

I am nothing anymore, worthless it is plain to see

I am just existing,rejection , pain and fear

I have no outlook no future, would rather not be here

To face each day is like torture to me

Nobody cares what happens its plain to see

Cries for help seem to go unheard anymore

So it seems i just have to close the final door

I feel worthless, unloved rejected why carry on?

I will not be missed, forgotten,life will go on.

So as i write the last poem try and see

It"s the Illness talking its not realy me.

I need to feel; needed I thought that I was

Now just an empty shell

Going to hell.

Choosing to hibernate continuing to live

Its a sin to take my life It is not mine to give

GOD will decide and nobody else. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 36 [informant] => dougnut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

LOST

Contributed by dougnut on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 04:25:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Lost

I who have nothing to offer anybody anymore

I feel it is time that i closed the door

Just do not be alarmed I still have lots to give

But feeling un-needed why continue to live

This past 12 months has been an eye opener to me

I am nothing anymore, worthless it is plain to see

I am just existing,rejection , pain and fear

I have no outlook no future, would rather not be here

To face each day is like torture to me

Nobody cares what happens its plain to see

Cries for help seem to go unheard anymore

So it seems i just have to close the final door

I feel worthless, unloved rejected why carry on?

I will not be missed, forgotten,life will go on.

So as i write the last poem try and see

It"s the Illness talking its not realy me.

I need to feel; needed I thought that I was

Now just an empty shell

Going to hell.

Choosing to hibernate continuing to live

Its a sin to take my life It is not mine to give

GOD will decide and nobody else.

Copyright © dougnut ... [ 2006-05-03 16:25:15]
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Re: LOST (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:47:59 PM AEST
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Well I will stand, make the first comment regardless.. you are my friend.. stop that nonsense.. I am here for you.. hugs.. RaquelLeah... I am here at ypdc for my friends.. all who want to be my friend, just count on me.. I am already your friend without the asking.. dear poet writer.. message me.. if you are lost, be with me lost in the love of God.. christians, non christians, and any other people who love life and creator, can we all get along.. I feel something is lost here.. doug,... work with me.. and if ypdc lets you and I stay, we believers, us deep christian writers so beit.. if not.. then it is out of our hands.. and into Gods.. RaquelLeah

Re: LOST (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:42:30 AM AEST
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So sorry I was not the first to this wonderful poem.
You are infinitely precious my friend, do not realize it, but truly are. The apple of the eye of the Lord.
Who was himselrf rejected and noone knows better than Him how it feels.
Oh Achievatron mentality - a culture that is only out for achievement on the spot.
So, they considered our Blessed Lord a failure - a social failure the one who holds the cosmos in the hand.
Commend yourself unto Him and carry one with your beautiful work disregarding momentary set backs.
e all have them.

Thanks a lot for sharing
Love and peace
Elizabeth

Re: LOST (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 02:23:40 PM AEST
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Doug, I hate the thought of you feeling like this.

Remember we are all on the same ship, there are a lot of selfish people who should walk the plank.

But you are not one of them you deserve to stay on board with the rest of your shipmates!

If you ever feel down or ever want to talk you can always PM me I am more than happy to listen

You might get more than you bargained for though! you'll probably end up having to sort me out!

All the best and god bless me ol' mate.

Johnny.

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