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you spoil me
roses, three white, one red
candlelight
soulful bluesy jazz filling the air
chardonnay, creamy baked brie, grapes and those lovely little crackers
a gorgeous wood fire flickering away.
soft, magical kisses between
poetry of blake, yeats,eliot and
the silly, funny stories you've brought with you tonight
warm fuzzies
shared laughter
feet being rubbed
the occasional hug
loving whispers
and
one slow and sensuous dance....

and then it's time for you to go.....
so..

i become your coffee-grinding mama
i know you like it steamy, creamy, hot and sweet.
just a little something,
hot on the kitchen table,
before you go out the door. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 43 [informant] => roisin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

you spoil me

Contributed by roisin on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

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you spoil me
roses, three white, one red
candlelight
soulful bluesy jazz filling the air
chardonnay, creamy baked brie, grapes and those lovely little crackers
a gorgeous wood fire flickering away.
soft, magical kisses between
poetry of blake, yeats,eliot and
the silly, funny stories you've brought with you tonight
warm fuzzies
shared laughter
feet being rubbed
the occasional hug
loving whispers
and
one slow and sensuous dance....

and then it's time for you to go.....
so..

i become your coffee-grinding mama
i know you like it steamy, creamy, hot and sweet.
just a little something,
hot on the kitchen table,
before you go out the door.

Copyright © roisin ... [ 2003-02-04 22:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: you spoil me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 11:10:52 PM AEST
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oh rosie you are funny!!

Re: you spoil me (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 02:00:03 AM AEST
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Are you sure it wasn't you on the kitchen table! Oh, how I loved this - man I dream of these things too! Thanks Rosie for the ideas! ... Jan

Re: you spoil me (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 07:36:10 AM AEST
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ta for your comments...hope this piece brings a smile to a few faces today....
rosie
ps did to mine!!!!!!

Re: you spoil me (User Rating: 1 )
by Dani on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 07:36:22 PM AEST
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hehe... great write Rosie, as always!

Re: you spoil me (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 10:38:59 AM AEST
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rosie, Who's a lucky girl then? A very vivid picture I could smell the coffee

Re: you spoil me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 07:00:37 PM AEST
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enjoyable write have to try some of that on my aniversary

Shari

Re: you spoil me (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:22:39 PM AEST
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Great poem!!!

mckayla

Re: you spoil me (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 04:51:16 PM AEST
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oooh lala !!!!! A little "breakfast" ala kitchen table huh? hehe ;o) For gods sake move the silverware before someone gets a fork stuck somewhere. :oP Great funny and naughty write! Well done rosie! Larry

Re: you spoil me (User Rating: 1 )
by krismisevski on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 12:55:48 AM AEST
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"just a little something,
hot on the kitchen table"

Great lines! Very spontaneous. I'd almost like to see the words 'hot and sweet' removed. Just 'steamy and creamy'. Leave the rest to the imagination. The line that follows is the knock-out punch. A little less info could be a better build up for the piece.

Joyfull read.
Kris Misevski

Re: you spoil me (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 03:58:59 PM AEST
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Oh rosie - this is great - is this guy for real? Lock and bolt the door - don't let him leave lol. what a cool write!!!!

merry

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