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Array ( [sid] => 119410 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Through the Window [time] => 2006-05-03 05:20:01 [hometext] => A sad story....... [bodytext] => I can see your face,
Smell your hair,
Almost feel your warmth,
And yet,
I cannot touch you.

Through the Window.

I can see you cry,
But I can't wipe
Your tears away.
Please don't cry
For me,
I am doing okay.

Through the Window.

You are beautiful,
But its getting dark,
You are going further
Away from me.

Through the Window.

It's so warm and calm,
I can't see you anymore.
Please don't cry for me.
Now I go to a better place.
Don't cry for me.
For I love you,
Now I'm gone,
Away from you.

Through the Window. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 32 [informant] => EddieDean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Through the Window

Contributed by EddieDean on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 05:20:01 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I can see your face,
Smell your hair,
Almost feel your warmth,
And yet,
I cannot touch you.

Through the Window.

I can see you cry,
But I can't wipe
Your tears away.
Please don't cry
For me,
I am doing okay.

Through the Window.

You are beautiful,
But its getting dark,
You are going further
Away from me.

Through the Window.

It's so warm and calm,
I can't see you anymore.
Please don't cry for me.
Now I go to a better place.
Don't cry for me.
For I love you,
Now I'm gone,
Away from you.

Through the Window.

Copyright © EddieDean ... [ 2006-05-03 05:20:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Through the Window (User Rating: 1 )
by Forgotten_soul on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:21:10 AM AEST
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thats so deep, it confuzes me, so it must be good! ( kinda dim here )

Re: Through the Window (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 03:13:42 PM AEST
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perhaps its just becuase i am sad atm but that made me cry :P
it's really good.
people like you set the standards very high for the rest of us

Re: Through the Window (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 04:50:52 PM AEST
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Very sad,but a very beautiful write..
Will read all your work..
God Bless!
candysears

Re: Through the Window (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 07:10:25 AM AEST
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Very deep. I like it a lot. I will have to try to set my standards this high.

Re: Through the Window (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:05:31 AM AEST
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A magical write even tho it's sad.
Awesome work!
huggs, smiles, windows,
emy

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