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And maybe not watch our children die?
Is it okay to give up and die?
Not try anymoreand let the pain engulf what is left behind?
Is there a time you still think of me?
Or do you cry knowing I'll never love you you once more.
Is it time to forgive you?
Even though just thoughts of being without you almost made me die?
Is there a place where I can love you?
And know no one will be in our way?
Is it okay to give up on you now?
Not try anymore and give up what was once called love?
Is there a time you just want me to hold you close?
Or do you still want to put that bullet in my head?
Is it time to tell you?
That my heart still belongs to you? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 22 [informant] => cryingonmyporch [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Is it... Can I...

Contributed by cryingonmyporch on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Is there a place where we can cry?
And maybe not watch our children die?
Is it okay to give up and die?
Not try anymoreand let the pain engulf what is left behind?
Is there a time you still think of me?
Or do you cry knowing I'll never love you you once more.
Is it time to forgive you?
Even though just thoughts of being without you almost made me die?
Is there a place where I can love you?
And know no one will be in our way?
Is it okay to give up on you now?
Not try anymore and give up what was once called love?
Is there a time you just want me to hold you close?
Or do you still want to put that bullet in my head?
Is it time to tell you?
That my heart still belongs to you?

Copyright © cryingonmyporch ... [ 2003-02-04 21:20:00]
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Re: Is it... Can I... (User Rating: 1 )
by chantel on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 11:57:39 AM AEST
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any it is time to move on i thik steven would want that you will never stop loving him but there is no sin in letting go.

Re: Is it... Can I... (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 09:36:30 PM AEST
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Chris I let go of Steven a long time ago. This particular one wasn't for Steven it was for someone else. If you must know the name Annabelle. It is a lot different from the name steven (different sex too). Any how I just wanted to let you know. I mean Steve will always be there in the way back of my head. I didn't love him, I just didn't want to be without him. And now the thought of him is nothing but sorrow so it is better I don't have him anywhere in my life.
Always your homie. (hehe)
Amy

Re: Is it... Can I... (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 07:13:24 PM AEST
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the heartbeat of love and the heartaches too, life does go on, and only gets better, celebrate everday as if it were your last, great write again,

Re: Is it... Can I... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 08:41:08 PM AEST
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sad...but umm..if he was gong to shoot you the hell with him.. espescially if kids are involved.. move on my friend..

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