Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 15:52:00 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 119338 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => JOY OF TOGETHERNESS. [time] => 2006-05-01 21:18:00 [hometext] => I offer every breathing moment of life, to you my love. [bodytext] => .
Magic of love; joy of togetherness,
those precious movement of glee that
cherished and flourished - radiating cheerful
fragrance of trust - past a decade and a half.

Buff broke the empty bobble; gone were
those fragile illusion of togetherness
stood alone drowned beneath those fond haunting
memories, piercing my heart like thorny spikes.

My longing spirit awaits, for that moment in time
when my soul unchains from the mortal cage to
reunite thee my love in our divine abode, where there
be no severance form perpetuity and beyond.

My heart throbs to be drunk in love until an angel of death
knock at my door steps to escort me to thee my love.
(FRANCO)
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 24 [informant] => FRANCO [notes] => (That 'a' has been removed) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

JOY OF TOGETHERNESS.

Contributed by FRANCO on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

.
Magic of love; joy of togetherness,
those precious movement of glee that
cherished and flourished - radiating cheerful
fragrance of trust - past a decade and a half.

Buff broke the empty bobble; gone were
those fragile illusion of togetherness
stood alone drowned beneath those fond haunting
memories, piercing my heart like thorny spikes.

My longing spirit awaits, for that moment in time
when my soul unchains from the mortal cage to
reunite thee my love in our divine abode, where there
be no severance form perpetuity and beyond.

My heart throbs to be drunk in love until an angel of death
knock at my door steps to escort me to thee my love.
(FRANCO)

Copyright © FRANCO ... [ 2006-05-01 21:18:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:58:48 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

An awesome, incredible Write that shows the reader that true lyv never dies.
huggs,
emystar

Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 10:39:16 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Awww Franco, I feel your pain and loss through this write. Don't be too hurry to go, though. Remember, you are needed here.
Hugs,
A. Jenni

Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS. (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 12:26:17 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Lost love. I can feel it. It sounds like what my sister-in-law was saying to me this weekend about my brother. He was her first real love.

I just don't know what to say!

Joanna

Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS. (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 07:31:34 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Oh Franco! - there is hardly anybody who can more emphasize with your splendid words of love for your departed wife than I can.

But she hears you, she knows all about it. feels your poem,. every line of it. Exactly as my Stephen does.
It feels as if he looked over my shoulders.

Wonderful tribute! - only a great and deep love as yours can as yours can give it.
And your beloved wife is aware of it by the grace of God, the source of all love.

Blessings
Elizabeth

Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 06:24:44 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Masterful (as usual) movement from rememberance to reunion of forever. I agree, although fearless of unchaining the soul, we'd like to have ya 'round. I wanna turn ya into cowboy!

A gripper of the heart, this piece of yours. And a wonderful and I'll bet ya, heard by someone special waitin' fer you. Kinda like words waiting on a wall, she'll show ya that it's hanging on her wall in eternity. Flawless work, well, 'cept that a between like and thorny in the second verse. Don't worry, we fergive genius.

Re: JOY OF TOGETHERNESS. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 04:40:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I never have left the love of my first husband who is in heaven.. I know one day we will all be together.. all of us.. even my husband michael awaits for this happiness.. God allowed my first husbands wishes and prayers to be alive in Him with my second husband.. so.. your poem really is deep and says something to me.. I pray you are well.. and one day.. a most beautiful angel will help you get to her... and the same goes for me and all others.. praise God..

A masterpiece poem.. love and hugs, your spiritual sister.. raquelleah who does love and care..

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com