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There’s a song within a heart
Whilst beauty gleams a lone thought teems
Of love once torn apart

I’ve often tried though love defied
To write it all away
Yet so denied I must abide
To this love of yesterday

If I could find the love for which I’ve pined
My heart may beat again
For now resigned and to my dreams confined
I may lay down my lonely pen [comments] => 9 [counter] => 317 [topic] => 22 [informant] => wizard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Yesterday's Love

Contributed by wizard on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:18:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Within these dreams it often seems
There’s a song within a heart
Whilst beauty gleams a lone thought teems
Of love once torn apart

I’ve often tried though love defied
To write it all away
Yet so denied I must abide
To this love of yesterday

If I could find the love for which I’ve pined
My heart may beat again
For now resigned and to my dreams confined
I may lay down my lonely pen

Copyright Â© wizard ... [ 2006-05-01 19:18:09]
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Re: Yesterday's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:27:38 PM AEST
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awww kinda sad
good write

hugs

Re: Yesterday's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:32:08 PM AEST
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wow.... great emotion conveyed in only three stanzas. Very moving, very delightful, and an excellant rhyme scheme. The title aswell is very thought provoking. Yesterday's love. very symbolic, very meaningful. congrats on such a great write.

Re: Yesterday's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:32:22 PM AEST
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A painfully, sad write. I must confess, I prefer your romantic
writes to these forlorn melancholies . . . but that in itself
says something about your ability to evoke emotion and
make your reader feel along with you. That is
mastery. [ Or is it wizardry? ] lol j/k

Tremendous piece. Très emotive! Gosh, your heart is
just so beautiful. Truly.

~Breezy

Re: Yesterday's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 08:07:08 PM AEST
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~*Paul*~
You see the above work displayed is that of a talented and gifted poet. You make the reader feel ur pain and sadness through ur words. Sadly u speak with a wounded heart. Time heals all wounds my friend.May you find someone special real soon who shall be worthy of ur heart and love.
Heartfelt hugs,
~*dreamer*~

Re: Yesterday's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 09:46:07 PM AEST
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fantastic alliteration bro-
another fine write.

great work~

B

Re: Yesterday's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 11:16:29 PM AEST
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A very melodic write.....flowed very well in its sadness.
Hope all is well..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Yesterday's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Aeris030388 on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 08:58:35 AM AEST
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A very good write. I could feel the sadness.
-Roxanne.

Re: Yesterday's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 05:24:56 PM AEST
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noooo. pick up the pen.... oh this is so sad... I pray you are alright.. hugs... RL

Re: Yesterday's Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 05:49:58 PM AEST
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Second reading.. ok, give the pen a rest, your heart a rest.. then pick it up and start over.. still a most lovely poem... beautiful message of the heart speaking out its piece.. make it a today... love... a new poem from the heart, a brand new start... thanking God for making more than just 1 day, so we can keep starting over a fresh new way of wonderment and learning each day as it comes..

Hugs,

RaquelLeah DuPont

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