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Array ( [sid] => 119290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If your are ……, who am I? [time] => 2006-05-01 05:07:21 [hometext] => This is just an expression of our love and how united myself and my wife remain [bodytext] => When you remain in the flourish gardens
Am I the busy bee or flower curtains?
At morn you go to cook in the kitchens
Do I remain as sugar or other provisions?

You wear the colorful and long silk sarees
Am I embedded as the colors or fibers?
Adorning your long hairs, laze the flowers
Do I remain as the petals or the threads?

Elegant is your appearance with the necklace
Am I the metal adorning this beautiful face?
Beauty is seen in your hands with the bangles
Do I remain as the beauty of your ankles?

To wet your feet sea waves come in row
Am I the chain-ring whom this angel tow?
Dreams of youth are on the edge of your eyes
Do I remain as vision making observation wise?

You lay yourself at night over the cushion
With your embrace, here I obtain fusion
At this time, if I should measure our passion
I don`t know, if it would extend beyond an ocean

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 24 [informant] => girish [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

If your are ……, who am I?

Contributed by girish on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 05:07:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

When you remain in the flourish gardens
Am I the busy bee or flower curtains?
At morn you go to cook in the kitchens
Do I remain as sugar or other provisions?

You wear the colorful and long silk sarees
Am I embedded as the colors or fibers?
Adorning your long hairs, laze the flowers
Do I remain as the petals or the threads?

Elegant is your appearance with the necklace
Am I the metal adorning this beautiful face?
Beauty is seen in your hands with the bangles
Do I remain as the beauty of your ankles?

To wet your feet sea waves come in row
Am I the chain-ring whom this angel tow?
Dreams of youth are on the edge of your eyes
Do I remain as vision making observation wise?

You lay yourself at night over the cushion
With your embrace, here I obtain fusion
At this time, if I should measure our passion
I don`t know, if it would extend beyond an ocean

Copyright Â© girish ... [ 2006-05-01 05:07:21]
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Re: If your are ……, who am I? (User Rating: 1 )
by ham323 on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 08:48:11 AM AEST
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Aww, I really like this poem. Very thoughtful! That's the kinda of love I think everyone wants. Good job!

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