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MY FIRST LOVE

Feelings push through

Sitting and contemplating.

Past, future, and present

So much time instigating

Not intentional but unpleasant

A life of much to do

It’s enough for you

Still what is it

Anger or bliss?

So much time has gone by.

Decisions were made.

Why?

Must you give up on your first love?

Must you stop writing for a life above?

Misunderstandings;

It has to be,

For my first love is God;

And writing is his gift to me.

Joanna G. Barber

3/31/2006 2:39 AM
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MY FIRST LOVE

Contributed by jgb on Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 04:22:04 AM in AEST
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MY FIRST LOVE

Feelings push through

Sitting and contemplating.

Past, future, and present

So much time instigating

Not intentional but unpleasant

A life of much to do

It’s enough for you

Still what is it

Anger or bliss?

So much time has gone by.

Decisions were made.

Why?

Must you give up on your first love?

Must you stop writing for a life above?

Misunderstandings;

It has to be,

For my first love is God;

And writing is his gift to me.

Joanna G. Barber

3/31/2006 2:39 AM

Copyright Â© jgb ... [ 2006-04-30 04:22:04]
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Re: MY FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 05:02:49 AM AEST
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Some time we come to such a point of our life; a cross road; where we wake up and wonder which way to go. Here my poet friend is standing in one such cross road and trying to evaluate within, what to choose. The inner conflict is beautifully portrayed by the poet in this work.
FRANCO

Re: MY FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 05:47:12 AM AEST
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You are fortunate to have a husband. I've been mairried ****** times but never have I had a husband.
In this magnificent write it show's your prioritys are in order.
huggs,
emy

Re: MY FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 10:27:58 PM AEST
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Oh My JBG this was simply Loverly!
Thank you so much for sharing your feelings with us.
Roses at your feet dear...........this was truly magnificent!
Warm love
consue

Re: MY FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 02:38:30 AM AEST
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A beautiful murel of emotions entwined with

spiritual conviction. Most lovely.

Ben

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