Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 16:40:27 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 119245 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing [time] => 2006-04-30 02:09:17 [hometext] => i wrote this for a girl in my life [bodytext] => I feel like I'm nothing
Speaking to you on the phone
I feel like a ghost
Sitting here all alone
I spill out my heart
But you don稚 do the same
These feelings they hurt me
The lack of words they drain
Looking into your eyes I see a life
But do you see my dream
When you tell me you love me
Inside I want to scream
But what do you care
You値l just go about your way
And I値l be left here
With nothing to say
Then late at night
I値l write you a poem
Saying how I messed up
And how the pain just grows
And you値l feel remorse
For making me feel like this
And you値l apologize for it all
As I begin to cut my wrist
You値l see the scars
And get really mad
But what should I care
When you池e just so far
And you know what I mean
I致e said it before
But you値l ask anyways
Because all those other times you ignored
So hear me now
I'm in love with you
And hurts me so bad
Because you never make a sound
And I feel like nothing
When we say goodbye
So I値l be sad again
Feeling like a ghost tonight [comments] => 4 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lonely_boy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Nothing

Contributed by lonely_boy on Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 02:09:17 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I feel like I'm nothing
Speaking to you on the phone
I feel like a ghost
Sitting here all alone
I spill out my heart
But you don稚 do the same
These feelings they hurt me
The lack of words they drain
Looking into your eyes I see a life
But do you see my dream
When you tell me you love me
Inside I want to scream
But what do you care
You値l just go about your way
And I値l be left here
With nothing to say
Then late at night
I値l write you a poem
Saying how I messed up
And how the pain just grows
And you値l feel remorse
For making me feel like this
And you値l apologize for it all
As I begin to cut my wrist
You値l see the scars
And get really mad
But what should I care
When you池e just so far
And you know what I mean
I致e said it before
But you値l ask anyways
Because all those other times you ignored
So hear me now
I'm in love with you
And hurts me so bad
Because you never make a sound
And I feel like nothing
When we say goodbye
So I値l be sad again
Feeling like a ghost tonight




Copyright ツゥ lonely_boy ... [ 2006-04-30 02:09:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 02:39:20 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I feel ya-
love is, all at once, the most beautiful.. AND most painful thing we can endure~

Hang in there Boy .. from this pain, you'll grow stronger!

Truly-

Billy aka..Man On High


Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by ham323 on Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 07:31:31 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Interesting poem.


Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by AmandaChartrand on Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 12:00:19 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
wow..im almost speachless this was beautifuly written i know how you feel love can hurt.....but you put the words together so magically its so beautiful


Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by MrPerfect on Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 01:07:45 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
dont worry you'll be fine
i'm getting through a breakup
so i know what your feeling




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ツゥ

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright ツゥ to their submitter. All the rest Copyright ツゥ 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com