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Array ( [sid] => 119221 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LETS MAKE THIS REAL [time] => 2006-04-29 20:23:40 [hometext] => COMMENTS ARE NICE [bodytext] => Lets make this real

I know i messed up before
But now i think about it
Your still there
Still there waiting
What was i blocked by
Your beautiful and amazing
I cant get you out my mind
You are contagius
And i know
This is what should happen
Lets make this real
Make it real this time
Take it to the end
Im sorry for the past
And i wanna make it up to you
with the love i wanna show you
Now can i have this one last chance
The chance that will make us eternity
The chance to have love
I wanna show you i can make it all up to you
In any shape form or word
Your my star moon and night
You make me rize up everymorning
So give me another chance to make you smile
To make your day every day
To be yours
So i can have your heart
And you can have mine
Kiera your amazing in every way
All i want is one more chance

ALWAYS BRANDEN GOODRICH

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => BEE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

LETS MAKE THIS REAL

Contributed by BEE on Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 08:23:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Lets make this real

I know i messed up before
But now i think about it
Your still there
Still there waiting
What was i blocked by
Your beautiful and amazing
I cant get you out my mind
You are contagius
And i know
This is what should happen
Lets make this real
Make it real this time
Take it to the end
Im sorry for the past
And i wanna make it up to you
with the love i wanna show you
Now can i have this one last chance
The chance that will make us eternity
The chance to have love
I wanna show you i can make it all up to you
In any shape form or word
Your my star moon and night
You make me rize up everymorning
So give me another chance to make you smile
To make your day every day
To be yours
So i can have your heart
And you can have mine
Kiera your amazing in every way
All i want is one more chance

ALWAYS BRANDEN GOODRICH

Copyright © BEE ... [ 2006-04-29 20:23:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: LETS MAKE THIS REAL (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 10:56:18 PM AEST
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I'll comment..
and say this:

"WHATEVER IT WAS YOU DID WRONG,
DON'T MAKE THAT MISTAKE AGAIN.
lOVE COMES MANY TIMES THROUOUT LIFE,
BUT.. TRUE LOVE COMES ONCE."

I hope she understands...
and you get another chance.

your soul's poured out onto pape here..
either way.. good work-

Billy

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