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Array ( [sid] => 119167 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sara [time] => 2006-04-28 21:05:43 [hometext] => She hurt me. Its pay back time [bodytext] => Shuffle off this mortal coil

Drape it round your feet

Tie the end in a hangmans noose

Smile nice and sweet

Walk around in your dead haze

Find another fool

Take him out, show him a good time

Push him in the pool

Hold him down til the bubbles stop

make him just like you

Put him in a cage to show your friends

You're good at what you do

What happens when he rises up

breaks open his liitle box

cuts you from navel to the neck

Fills you full of rocks

sweetly rubs your troubled face

give a little peck

pushes you in your dark water

noose around your neck

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Sara

Contributed by dedpoet on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 09:05:43 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Shuffle off this mortal coil

Drape it round your feet

Tie the end in a hangmans noose

Smile nice and sweet

Walk around in your dead haze

Find another fool

Take him out, show him a good time

Push him in the pool

Hold him down til the bubbles stop

make him just like you

Put him in a cage to show your friends

You're good at what you do

What happens when he rises up

breaks open his liitle box

cuts you from navel to the neck

Fills you full of rocks

sweetly rubs your troubled face

give a little peck

pushes you in your dark water

noose around your neck

Copyright © dedpoet ... [ 2006-04-28 21:05:43]
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Re: Sara (User Rating: 1 )
by onceandagain on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 09:36:27 PM AEST
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Revenge is a dish best served cold. I liked this poem, it is like one I wrote for my ex husband. It feels good to get all the hostility out, even if nothing is really done to the person that made us feel so angry. Good write, keep up the good work.

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