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That glimpse of your tears dropping on floor oh dear
A sad looking girl hoping life was much more fair
Sometimes beauty is seen thru tears of despair
Don''t u worry girl you are pretty please end your tears

I saw you again but I was busy to make an affair
Maybe later on in the day I''ll see you again
Shining hair your hairdresser must do care
I did not see wat was behind those tears
But eyes like a crystal a jewelers top care
Maybe thats how they look but when can I peer

Now I see what a wonderful dear you are
Damn girl life seems endless in your care
You are beautiful I can''t stop tellin you
My heart inside feels full of life from you

Again now I do not know wat I''d do without seein u
But looking at those eyes makes my heart fall in love
With a beautiful girl that I want to adore
Baby oh baby you are what u are
And I''m gonna tell ya that till our lives end somewhere [comments] => 7 [counter] => 373 [topic] => 2 [informant] => packatack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

You are Beautiful

Contributed by packatack on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:26:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I seen you before I''m tryin to remember where
That glimpse of your tears dropping on floor oh dear
A sad looking girl hoping life was much more fair
Sometimes beauty is seen thru tears of despair
Don''t u worry girl you are pretty please end your tears

I saw you again but I was busy to make an affair
Maybe later on in the day I''ll see you again
Shining hair your hairdresser must do care
I did not see wat was behind those tears
But eyes like a crystal a jewelers top care
Maybe thats how they look but when can I peer

Now I see what a wonderful dear you are
Damn girl life seems endless in your care
You are beautiful I can''t stop tellin you
My heart inside feels full of life from you

Again now I do not know wat I''d do without seein u
But looking at those eyes makes my heart fall in love
With a beautiful girl that I want to adore
Baby oh baby you are what u are
And I''m gonna tell ya that till our lives end somewhere

Copyright © packatack ... [ 2006-04-28 03:26:42]
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Re: You are Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:41:58 AM AEST
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heavenly beautifull and someone is so very fortunate to have you.
huggs,
emy

Re: You are Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 05:23:46 AM AEST
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beautifully written , nice job

Re: You are Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by kaitee on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:26:53 AM AEST
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what a sweet poem

~Kaitee

Re: You are Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:37:00 AM AEST
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wow m,an beautifully written...so simple yet so moving..n so layered...weel done

Re: You are Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by k2kdesigner on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 01:51:03 PM AEST
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Very emotional poem--I wish I could read a poem like this that was written about me, she's very lucky.

Re: You are Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 05:18:18 PM AEST
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wow pack.. this is really cool stuff.. do not make time, take time and find her again.. you have a deep love inside of you, do not waste it..

RaquelLeah

Re: You are Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:37:40 AM AEST
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Eyes are the window to the soul. Though I am not fortunate enough to have fallen in love with such a poet as yourself, the words are there in his eyes. Whomever she may be do not let her go without reading this poem.
Megan(and her bun in the oven)

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