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Hatred for a childhood home yet loving as it was.
Unwanted now ,or so it seams, a burden on ones life.

Not bitter though cos' other weights deflect a fleeting visit.
No blame is laid by me ,for dark is the path ahead,
and quater century time to leave, and feel release inside. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 13 [informant] => welch12 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

visit in dark

Contributed by welch12 on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 01:41:29 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A scar develops no visable wound set deep a hole so black.

Hatred for a childhood home yet loving as it was.
Unwanted now ,or so it seams, a burden on ones life.

Not bitter though cos' other weights deflect a fleeting visit.
No blame is laid by me ,for dark is the path ahead,
and quater century time to leave, and feel release inside.

Copyright © welch12 ... [ 2006-04-28 01:41:29]
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Re: visit in dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Penguindave on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 04:12:19 AM AEST
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What a very deep and honest write! it must have been a difficult subject to portray in words. I too have suffered in childhood and the scares always remain, but life goes on.

A very deep and moving write thankyou for keeping it real.

Re: visit in dark (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 05:00:26 AM AEST
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When fear enters inside a tender heart it remains forever like a permanent scare. The words were beautifully complied, though short, but yet conveys the notion of the poet very clearly.
FRANCO

Re: visit in dark (User Rating: 1 )
by gribbs on Sunday, 18th November 2007 @ 04:03:32 AM AEST
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somtimes the only way to go forward in this life, is to never look back...as hard as it may be...good write...

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