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[sid] => 119078
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => A lonely place
[time] => 2006-04-27 12:17:18
[hometext] => On Universal Family
[bodytext] => I would hold you til the morning if you''d let me
I would walk with you at midnight til the dawn
A thousand times I''d forgive if you wronged me
If i know you would teach me of true love
A lonely place
is this world of ours
where people pass without saying hello
A solemn tale
is our story
with words we often do not want to tell
I''d walk to coals of fire if you asked me to
If I knew that you''d do the same for me
I''d swim across the ocean just to comfort you
If I knew that you wanted to see me
A lonely place
is this world of ours
where people pass and without say hello
I wish for once
it would be different
and you i could really get to know
A lonely place
is this world of ours
where people pass and barely say hello
but we can change
our solemn tale
to a story the whole wide world can know
You are my brother
You are my sister
I want to take the time to get to know you better
You are my family
You are my unity
Without you i can not cope with the world
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 560
[topic] => 34
[informant] => Archie
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 30
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SongLyrics
)
A lonely place
Contributed by
Archie
on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 12:17:18 PM in AEST
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I would hold you til the morning if you''d let me
I would walk with you at midnight til the dawn
A thousand times I''d forgive if you wronged me
If i know you would teach me of true love
A lonely place
is this world of ours
where people pass without saying hello
A solemn tale
is our story
with words we often do not want to tell
I''d walk to coals of fire if you asked me to
If I knew that you''d do the same for me
I''d swim across the ocean just to comfort you
If I knew that you wanted to see me
A lonely place
is this world of ours
where people pass and without say hello
I wish for once
it would be different
and you i could really get to know
A lonely place
is this world of ours
where people pass and barely say hello
but we can change
our solemn tale
to a story the whole wide world can know
You are my brother
You are my sister
I want to take the time to get to know you better
You are my family
You are my unity
Without you i can not cope with the world
Copyright ©
Archie
... [
2006-04-27 12:17:18]
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Re: A lonely place
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 12:42:22 PM AEST
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I really like the crreativity and style of this poem. It also sends an important message relative to all of mankind.....as most of your poems do.
Well done, Archie
Will |
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Re: A lonely place
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 01:18:53 PM AEST
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This is really awesome, it's deep.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: A lonely place
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 01:30:41 PM AEST
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I sooooo LOVED this write and it's meaning. Oh! Well said and done, Arch.
Peace my brother, Laura |
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Re: A lonely place
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 01:43:01 PM AEST
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Another brilliant write, my friend.. You have again made it difficult for me to have a fav. poem by Archie..... Thank you for sharing this bit of wisdom..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: A lonely place
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by Packatack on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 03:15:36 PM AEST
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Wow this poem u wrote is awesome! Thanks for sharing
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Re: A lonely place
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 06:20:36 PM AEST
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Sing it, Archie, sing it! I think you might be singing to a choir that knows ya. Kinda like family. Kinda like Unity.
My compliments for this "song". My awe for the way put ...
if only. |
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Re: A lonely place
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 10:56:03 PM AEST
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How correct you are. I practice daily when I am out where others are, to smile, to say hello, to listen, interact with other humans... we need that interaction.. we need conversation. when we communicate to others respectfully, it is a way of love. And we are all connected as one big family.. all brothers and sisters.. I love your poem because it is real, and hits home for all ... it is that total oneness with the world..... since we cannot be everywhere at once, we can practice in our own small community.. sharing, loving each other.. a very good thing to teach to your baby immediately..
that we are all one family of God on one galactic level.. Yes.... we all come from the Father..it is that energy of love that we share with each other. that keeps us as one big family under His roof..
A most beautiful poem brother.
RaquelLeah |
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Re: A lonely place
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:59:23 AM AEST
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~*Archie*~
Inspring as always my dear friend. We are all one big family. A beautifully composed song filled with so much wisdom. I love visiting ur pages my dear friend. For its contents are always impressive and well worth the read. It's great to have u back. I missed u remarkable work heaps. Thanks for sharing ur wonderful work with us.
*warm hugs from ur fan/friend*
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: A lonely place
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 12:37:08 AM AEST
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| this oh so good |
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Re: A lonely place
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 02:35:00 PM AEST
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a beautifully human song, we all need some
interaction with others, beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A lonely place
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 07:36:43 AM AEST
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Bravo on a fine piece! Can't add much as other comments covered it quite well.
Invierno |
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Re: A lonely place
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by FireStarter on
Wednesday, 19th August 2015 @ 06:16:48 PM AEST
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I love this piece, its real deep
-firestarter :) |
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