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A vacant hole where my heart should be
Once I had a heart so full of love,you see
'Til someone took it away from me
Now theres only pain and sorrow
As I think of all my tomorrows
From day to night and night to day
Somewhere along that path I will pay
If life is such an easy road to follow
Why do I feel so empty and hollow?
Life isto be shared with family and friends
Full of joy and laughter
When the day you find it doesn't seem to matter
Thats when it all starts to fade and shatter
I live my life from day to day
Worrying and wondering about what to say
For if I should meet God some day
I'd fall at His feet,and i would pray
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If My Life Had Windows

Contributed by spring_40601 on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

If my life had windows,what could you see?
A vacant hole where my heart should be
Once I had a heart so full of love,you see
'Til someone took it away from me
Now theres only pain and sorrow
As I think of all my tomorrows
From day to night and night to day
Somewhere along that path I will pay
If life is such an easy road to follow
Why do I feel so empty and hollow?
Life isto be shared with family and friends
Full of joy and laughter
When the day you find it doesn't seem to matter
Thats when it all starts to fade and shatter
I live my life from day to day
Worrying and wondering about what to say
For if I should meet God some day
I'd fall at His feet,and i would pray
Oh,Heavenly Father take me away

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Re: If My Life Had Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 08:57:36 AM AEST
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Simply Beautifyl!
I feel your pain, for I too have written many poems on this subject.
May God Bless You!
Jeff

Re: If My Life Had Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 09:18:14 AM AEST
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very beautifully written.. you express your pain vividly.

Re: If My Life Had Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 10:26:56 AM AEST
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I too lost my mother a year & 1/2 ago so I know this pain you carry,this was so sadly beautiful,hang in there! Christina

Re: If My Life Had Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by spring_40601 on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 12:46:20 PM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words,and thank you for reading my poem.
This poem was written about 10 yrs ago and i just started submitting it...it also has been published in a book of poetry this past year....Memories Revisited.
Thanks again....God Bless

Re: If My Life Had Windows (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:33:17 AM AEST
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life is not an easy road. definitely lots of turns and adventures, though...living day by day is all that can be done it often seems

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